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I stop all your tears from falling, 2
I push away all your pain for you. 3
I am your shoulder to lean on when you need it, 4
I am your punching bag when you can’t take it. 5
Always there for you when you’re sad, 6
Supporting you when things have gone bad. 7
Catching you when you trip, 8
Pulling you over big obstacles. 9
Fighting for your sake, 10
Sometimes I absorb your pain, 11
And when you cry, I'll be there for you. 12
If we were to fight, you hate it so much, 13
But I’ll always be waiting for you to come back. 14
When you call, I'll stay on the phone until you’re gone. 15
When you yell, I'll take it all in, and lock it up. 16
I support everything you do - even if it’s wrong, 17
But i point it out for you; right from wrong. 18
Even though I do so much wrong, 19
You know that I’ll always be there; that’s right. 20
If you need it, I'll give it; 21
My life and soul. To keep you smiling, and to keep you alive. 22
I give you needed advice, 23
I let you vent out your problems on me. 24
Locking away all my suffering and problems, 25
Even though you know i have them. I still don’t complain, to you. 26
So that you can smile, and shine. So that you can be a happy little child. 27
I gave it all away; I let you go free, 28
My hope being you; I let you go free. 29
I was always there, I still am. 30
Your punching bag, your shoulder, your tear jar, 31
Your yelling container, your secret keeper, your 32
Big brother. 33
I am always there for you, 34
Forever a friend, forever your brother, 35
You don’t need to be there for me, 36
So don’t worry. 37
You don’t need to be my shoulder, 38
Or punching bag, 39
You don’t need to keep me strong. 40
All you need to do is smile and shine, 41
Be happy, don’t regret what happened; 42
Because you worrying for me, 43
You crying for my sake, 44
Is what hurts one the most. 45
Just sit back; let me be your everything, 46
Let me pull you through this life. 47
I don’t need help, all i need...48
Is for you to keep your hope up, to smile, 49
To breath, to live, to laugh. 50
I’m here for you… 51
I'm of use to you. 52
"I won’t let you suffer, i won’t let you cry. Even if I have to suffer, even if I have to die." - Winter. 53
Author notes
Haylee, I hope you read this, and I hope you get better soon. If you need me, anything, remember i'm here, I'll stay on the phone with you, ok?
I know you will get out of the hospital soon. =)
A contest entry
- Poetry! Poetry! Poetry! Oh my! by SparklingMoonlight.
320 points, ended July 2, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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that was sweet... a lovely write....so heart felt and honest !!! I think she would be happy...so cute..speecless now...!!!!
GOOD LUCK
Temaria - Blair
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aww that is so nice i like it >.>
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Awwwww. this is so sweet and caring. Is this really meant for someone?? If so, show it to them, it would mean a lot
Very loving and cute. Best of luck and thanks for entering!!
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I like this. It's very pretty, real sweet.
I like how it shows character. I enjoyed it a lot. It's cute. x3
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oh sad.kool.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I love this poem! Your sibling is very lucky to have you as a brother Nice write!
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awwww!!! Winter, this is so sweeeet. Haylee will LOVE This! Im possitive. I loved the emotion in this.. that you will always be there for her no matter what..
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Wow that was really nice and this is the first time i ever read one of your things
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Bravo
I enjoyed every line. Bravo!
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Oh wow.
It's great Winter. Just great. *tries not to cry*
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This is awesome, Shadow! Yes, I'm being the oddball on calling you that instead of Winter, like everyone else. Anyways, Awesome!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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So sweet!
Winter, Haylee will love this! Great job! I liked it! Keep up the great work! ^^
~Ashley~
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Aw, this is so sweet, Winter!
She'll love this!
Great flow, and I loved the switch from one person to the other's being there...if that made sense...o.O
HT/Gamer
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