Brother Dear

Oh Brother dear
What has happened
Your eyes, their cold
Your smile, it's gone
You did it, didn't you
You killed them
Because of you
Mom
Dad
Our clan
It's dead
Oh Brother dear
You left me
Why
Oh Brother dear
You came back
Not for me
I'm still weak
You came for my best friend
You told me
Close my heart
I did
And yet
You forgot me
You left me again
Why
Oh Brother dear
Are you happy
I have become strong
I closed my heart
I stand here
An avenger
Now before you die
Tell me
Why
Oh Brother dear
Why did you leave me
No
Brother dear
Answer me
You can't love me
No
I won't except that
Why then
Why did you kill them
Mom
Dad
You hated them
You loved me
You wanted me
Wanted me to grow strong
No
Damn it don't die
Oh Brother dear
I loved you too
So much that i hated you
Hated you leaving me
I looked up to you
Had respect for you
Now've killed you
You respect me
That's all i wanted
Before
Now i want you
Here
Let me be
A good little brother
Like before
Oh Brother dear
I just wanted your respect
Please forgive me
I didn't mean to kill you
I love you too
My dear brother
Itachi
Goodbye
I will miss you
Brother dear

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  • toolenduso
    June 4
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    Sorry, no poems in the contest. Message me if you want to re-enter.


  • Quixotic Greeters member
    May 26
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    This was great. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for entering

  • Shadowed Phoenix
    May 24

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    A fanfic poem? The sad part is I know enough about that show to figure out what you were talking about by line ten. The poem was good, betther then I could ever do for a fanfic anyway. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Friesian gold member
    April 26

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    ZOMG!!

    I absolutely LOVE Sasuke! This portrayed their relationship well! Oh, I LOVED it! Great job! So powerful!