This is My Project,,,, Colloborator Andy Stephenson

Rain, Please Hide My Tears1

Chorus:2

Rain, Please hide my tears
I am crying
I need your help
Just this once
Please, Please,
Rain, hide my tears3


Verse One:4

Rain, rain, please hide my tears
If he should come
Can't let him see me cryin'5

Don't let him look beneath my tears
'Cause he's the one
Who has left me dyin'6

I thought I'd found a miracle
A love that's everlasting
Not something just in passing
But for always meant to be7

Yet the pin that burst my bubble
Was how I was neglected
And then by him rejected
With the pain he gave to me8

Verse Two:9

He walks past me
Heartbreak fills my breath
I feel that he is the Death
of me
Can't catch my breathin'10

Sorrowed, Pained
Rejected, neglected by him
Reflectin' on what
I used to be 11

I feel the pain
that flows through
my veins
But I can't feel you 12

Anymore13


Verse Three:14

(Katie Verse) 15


Verse Four:16

(Andy's)17

Verse five:
Just keep breathing
And the rain will, Hide my tears
Away from him
when I look in the mirror I
see a reflection of me,
that looks like you
Rain, rain please hide my tears

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  • scriptor
    May 19
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    i luv it

  • Christabob! I love it. thanks fer making me a collaberator! I'm happy now!

  • Good Start.

    "Teardrops On My Guitar" sounds like a great title and it might make a good hook. You need to capitalize my name, Andy Stephenson, for me to edit this story page as we go along.

    Andy