Part 21
The next day I searched the halls, the lunch room, and I even peeped into the classrooms I passed for her. For her solemn face and white hood. Confidence was nowhere to be found. I wasn’t really sure of why I was searching for her, but for some reason, I desperately wanted to see her again. There was something about her that intrigued me. Maybe I felt sorry for her, yes, I wanted to apologize to her for the way she was treated in the lunch room. Or maybe… maybe it was her hood, with her black curls spinning carelessly from beneath its rim. I had never seen her eyes, though I didn’t think anyone had. Her hood was always pulled down far over her eyes, exposing only the tip of her petite nose, and her small, rosy lips…2
What was I thinking?! I sounded obsessed with this girl! No, it wasn’t her hood! How absurd! I just felt pity for her, that was all. That was all…3
Author notes
short yes...
but this whole thing is just a short story for rdg/la class...bear with me. not many details....sorry
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Now on to chapter three I go! Hm.....this makes me wonder, does he ever meet confidence? Does confidence talk to him? I sound like an idiot, because confidence is a feeling, I guess a name, lol. W/e, off to chapter three I go, I liked this chapter, and yes, this dude is OBSESSED!
lylabb
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This sets up chapter three perfectly... already hinting at the "why I am thinking of this/ what is this I'm feeling" sort of desires... This was very descriptive in the sense of your character and her thoughts... what she is thinking and her confusion... Nice work!
~Andrew
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