Elfen Lied fan creation. (Unfinished)

"Sick again," Lucy's mother mumbled to herself as she left her 5 year old daughters bedroom. Fever's were common to Lucy. She was cursed with 2 horns that were calmly placed at the top of her head. The poor girl was so alone. Even her mother treated her poorly.1

In the darkness of her bedroom, Lucy lay still as ever. Her mind felt empty. She hated her life, and finally decided to run away.2

She collected her cloths and ran out of the front door while her mother was asleep. She was walking away, than began to run. Faster and faster, until she came across a tall man, sitting on a rock. He was very skinny, and seemed not to notice Lucy was there. He was reading a book titled, "How to Kill a Diclonius."3

Lucy's eyes grew narrow, as she darted away, hoping the man didn't notice her. She watched as he looked away from his book. His eyes searched around. "Hello? Is anyone there?" The man continued to look around. Lucy took a moment to think. There was only one way to be positive the man wouldn't see her. But she strongly didn't want to do it..but she had to.4

She waited calmly until the man looked away. She closed her eyes and sent her vectors about. Instantly the man was cut in half. Blood flew in all directions. Lucy opened her eyes and ran away from the torn body. She felt like she had just destroyed the world.5

She continued to run until her legs gave out and she collapsed.6

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Im only 12, and I love Elfen Lied so much, I wrote a story =] I LOVE to write and I LOVE elfen Lied. ^^

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