Tales of Fantasies ( Part 1)

I escaped into a world of enchantment and mystical magic1

The air was smooth and crisp2

Foggy with fireflies swarming3

I could hear the drums beating4

The ground was warm and grassy 5

My bare feet felt the earth tremor6

And in the distance I saw horsemen7

Valiant and strong sitting mounted upon their stallions8

My heart raced as they approached me.9

They were riding fast upon me and I was paralyzed 10

I couldn't move and they didn't seem to be slowing down11

I fell upon my knees in fear and wrapped my arms around my head of golden curls12

Then I felt the earth become still13

I slowly raised my head 14

To see the muscles from the horses body15

Nose to nose with the creature16

My eyes almost cross from being so close17

and just what I was afraid of.. the horse snorts18

Oh my now I was all wet with drool19

and a bit embarrassed for the mighty knight mounted upon the horse was watching20

I stood up to peek around the horse to see this knight21

As I tilted my head to see him he jumps off his horse22

and catches me looking with curiosity23

And to my expectations he was everything I had ever imagined24

His form was built strong and his muscles rippled through his armour25

The closer he walked the more my head had to go back to look up at him26

He was as tall as a mountain compared to me27

But the height of a mountain never stopped me before28

He raised his powerful hands to take off his metal mask29

and his Coal black curls sprung out30

His eyes were stern and dark brown 31

He had a face of  solid rock and structured as a sculpture32

I gasped with my mouth wide open at his stunning look33

I can't even begin to describe is lush lips34

Lips that my whole life I was meant to kiss35

The heat of the day showed upon my cheeks for they were red36

Well the heat was going to be the excuse37

My entire body blushed from his presence38

He walked closer to me and I began to back up39

I have no clue why, Afraid that his attentions were more than just giving me a kiss40

might have been a slight clue41

But I soon was up against a rock42

Between and a rock and a hard spot would be a good explanation43

My bosom showed my deep breaths increase the closer he got44

He was right there in front of me ..I could smell his musky sent45

I was going to melt right here in front of him46

My moisture started to bead upon my breasts47

My lips began to quiver..My legs trembled48

"What was he going to do?", "Oh what I wanted him to do!49

BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!50

I woke up in my drool upon my desk in study hall51

Looking around to see if anyone had seen me52

"Why did the bell have to ring!?!?!"53

And to my surprise someone was watching me. My history teacher.54

"Did you have a nice nap?" asked Mr. Valiant55

"Sorry I was a bit tired" I answered with disappointment56

Where do I begin about Mr. Valiant....His black curls 57

or his lush lips." If only I could have finished my daydream"58

SIGH "See you tomorrow Mr. Valiant" I whimpered59

Author notes

This has a bit of humor and a bit of erotica...I really enjoyed writing it cause I put myself in the place of the girl. A great way to escape!

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  • twinzy001
    January 6, 2005
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    excellant Ivy girl...I loved it! it was very descriptive which I liked alot my fav part was the ending where it was all just a dream !

  • Fatal1ty
    January 5, 2005
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    I liked it. A nice little twist in the fantasy at the end hehe.Can't wait to read part 2

  • AdequateSuspicions
    January 5, 2005
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    it was different, that is for sure. Good job though.


  • stardazer15
    January 5, 2005
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    Fabulous!

    It was very intresting and I enjoyed it very much, Good job

  • Luciferschild
    January 5, 2005
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    it couldve been much better, but it wasnt horrible


  • Dragonhippie
    January 5, 2005
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    YAY!

    Ooooh... that was lovely!!! Good job! I love a man in uniform hehe.

  • serene darkness
    January 5, 2005
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    hmm fascinating....the imagery was awesome

    great write

    Jen


  • Mozarts funeral
    January 5, 2005
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    great job! humor and erotica go good together!

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