I walk down the bumpy
Path of brown and yellow pebbles I listen to the chorus of waves
Crashing and spraying on the
Shore of this sandy beach
Slowly and deeply I
Inhale the salty air
Of the quiet sea
Through my noise wafts
the smell of rain on its way
I glance up to the sky
Hoping to catch a glimpse
Of the sunset on the horizons
Before the terrible storm
Shuts it out for a time
Then I see the true sea
A soft blue with puffy darker blue
Stream across the sky
Waves of clouds roll across
The vast open sea
Blues of every shade
Make up this moving sea
I gasp at the beautiful
Sight and watch it slowly fade
Then I hear a crack
And the sky lights up
In a brilliant light
The waves surge with energy
As the wind chases it
The blue seas turn a murky gray
Then I felt a cold wet drop
Slide down my cheek
With my face upturned
I laugh with silly joy
As the sky starts to cry
On this dry, brown Earth
Then I turn and run back up
The ruff path of stones
Sorry to leave my seas
For the rest of the night
Right before I went over the hill
I turned to wave goodbye
Making a silent promise to return
to see the seas
once again tomorrow
then I run over
the peak of the hill
that protects my home
from the angry seas
Author notes
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Comments
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Oh, this was sooo different! It's like I'm a whole nother person's story! I loved the imagery here-Path of brown and yellow pebbles I listen to the chorus of waves
Crashing and spraying on the
Shore of this sandy beach
THis part really captivated me and held my attention-the whole thing held my complete attention! REally beautiful! Ur reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally progressing fast! ^.^



