Night Sky

I glance up at the sky
Watching the stars twinkle
I see a stream of light
Flash across the darkened sky
The moon shines
Like a proud silver ruler
As it rules the night
I look for the constellations
That rule the sky with
the gorgeous moon
I’m at total lost
Hopeless in the sea of stars
I sigh as I realize that
I’m lost in the
Beautiful sky
How I wish I could be part
Of the peaceful world
Of the night sky.1

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