Their bodies still laid intertwined. Cheryl faced Terri a smile upon her lips as she dreamed away. The sun began to peek through the curtains. Terri began to stir. Fluttering her eyes she opened them looking into Cheryl's beautiful face. Terri couldn't believe it happened last night. The tension built between the two long off. She was pleased from the satisfaction they both got from it. Cheryl's eyes began to flutter then they opened.1
"Ah Good Morning beautiful!"2
Cheryl just stared at Terri like yeah ok if you say so. Terri began to sing Steve Holy's Good Morning Beautiful in her angelic voice.3
"Good morning beautiful
How was your night
Mine was wonderful
With you by my side
And when I open my eyes
And see your sweet face
It's a good morning beautiful day."4
"Now that is something I wouldn't mind waking up to every morning."5
Terri kissed Cheryl. Cheryl sighed. They both laid in bed neither of them wanting to move. Looking at the clock the green lights reading 8:00 a.m.6
"We should be ready to go say about 10:30."7
"Yeah we should. Let's order breakfast and then we can get a shower."8
"I hope ya talking about together." Terri winked at Cheryl.9
"Well if you want to we could. Just try not to get too distracted by my beautiful though."10
"Ah OK I will do my best. It's going to be hard."11
Cheryl grabbed the phone and dialed room service. She ordered both of them an omelet. Hanging up the phone she looked over at Terri.12
"Am I paying for this or are you?"13
"I can if ya want."14
"Sure because that means your going to need to get up and get dressed before he gets up here."15
"Nope. I just answer the door like this." Terri got out of bed naked. Cheryl just laughed.16
"Well I guess if you really want to."17
"What are you out of your mind?"18
"Yes since I am with you after all."19
Terri jumped back on the bed. "Thanks babe."20
Cheryl grabbed the pillow that Terri was laying on and hit her with it. Knocking Terri off of her. Terri began to push Cheryl off the bed.21
"OK OK I give up. I'm sorry."22
"Damn right ya better be."23
There was a knock at the door and both were startled. Terri quickly got up and through on her shirt and boxers. She walked over to the door. Opening the door she paid the bell hop. Wheeling in the cart she closed the door with her foot. Cheryl immediately jumped out of bed.24
"I'm starving."25
"Relax babe. Well you know you can eat me again?"26
"HA-HA! Terri your so damn horny."27
"What? I didn't say anything."28
"Yeah OK. Shush up and eat."29
Terri ate her breakfast slowly. Watching Cheryl woof hers down.30
"Damn Cheryl I guess ya was starving alright."31
"Oh bite me."32
"I will later."33
Putting their plates back on the cart. Cheryl pushed it towards Terri. 34
"Put this back out in the hall."35
"Sure thing babe."36
Putting the cart in the hall. She headed into the bathroom after Cheryl went in. Slapping her ass Cheryl jumped.37
"What the hell are you doing?"38
"I didn't mean to scare ya. What can I do to make you forgive me?"39
"Oh well..."40
Cheryl reached over and scooped some water up in her hand and splashed it all over Terri. 41
"Oh I see how it is."42
"I wanted to know if it was warm enough for you."43
"Sure it is."44
"Well strip down and let's hop in."45
Terri took of her boxers and shirt. She grabbed Cheryl and kissed her.46
"There is that better?"47
"Damn right it is."48
Terri hopped in and Cheryl followed behind. Closing the shower door Cheryl let the water soak her body. Terri's arms appeared around her waist. The feeling that Cheryl gets each time was like anything else she felt before. The warm fuzzing feeling inside. Terri's hand went down closer to Cheryl's pussy. Cheryl turned she looked deeply into Terri's eyes. The lust and admiration still floated there. Terri's fingers massaged Cheryl's pussy. Terri slowly inserted two fingers. She thrust slowly at first. The climax began to peek because Cheryl leaned up against the wall. Her breathing grew more heavy. The juices flowed wetting Terri's fingers. Cheryl's eyes closed enjoying the fast moment of in and out that Terri thrusted deep inside of her. Cheryl couldn't take it any longer and leaned on Terri. Her body was strong and firm. Cheryl kissed Terri's chest. Cheryl looked at Terri and smiled.49
"I told you not to get distracted."50
"Well ya make that kind of hard."51
"Oh well let me return the favor then."52
Cheryl's finger immediately went down the Terri's pussy. She couldn't hold back any longer. She thrusted deep and fast. Terri juices released. The tension felt like it had built up for a long time. Cheryl's fingers slowly exited. Terri sighed.53
"I think we should finish up here and head out."54
Cheryl began to wash her hair as Terri did hers. They both took turns and washed each other. Terri loved the feeling of Cheryl's hands all over her. What love instantly Terri thought no it can't be. It's too soon to tel she screamed in her head. Cheryl could see that Terri was thinking intently but what about. Cheryl didn't want to push anything. So she kissed Terri and went out to dry off. Terri followed soon behind.55
They both quickly got dressed and headed downstairs to pay for the bill. Terri walked out to the car still thinking about what it was she felt for Cheryl. Cheryl's heart ached what was Terri thinking. Cheryl paid for the bill and went out to the car where Terri waited. Terri smiled and instantly Cheryl felt something was wrong here. What she hoped it wasn't bad.
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Another fantastic chapter! I am so jealous of these women, my partner always refuses to shower with me I dont know why? There is something so amazing about waking up next to the person you love and morning sex is always the best in my oppinion, when your all fresh from a nights sleep but still all relaxed. Hmmm... your story is far too good you know! lol.
The only thing I would mention is that your dialogue was a bit disjointed feeling in this chapter. Dont get me wrong I love a lot of dialogue cos I think it is the best way to bring out a character, its just that I wasnt always sure who was talking all of the time. Mind you it is the middle of the night here so it may just be me being sleep deprived. lol. One more thing I would suggest would be not to call the characters by their names all the time. I realise with a story consisting mostly of two women saying 'she' all the time might get confusing but perhaps try refering to the ladies as other things. For example instead of 'Cheryl began to wash her hair as Terri did hers', how about something like 'the beautiful red head began to wash her hair as the tanned country girl did hers'. This is just a suggestion of course, you know how much I love your writing style (and you yourself obviously, lol).
I cant wait to read more hun, this story is truly fantastic! I cant wiat for Terri to give it up and admits shes in love!!!
X Amber X

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Wow thanks so much for the lovely comment. I will keep the advice in mind. I personally know who is talking because of the way I word Terri's but yeah I agree it does sometimes get confussing. I can't wait to see what you think about the next chapter.
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I cant wait either for the next chapter. It may be that I find it hard to spot the words Terri uses to tell apart who is speaking because Im English and so both women sound like thay have an accent to me. lol. Im sure if you were to read dialogue written in differnet British dialects you could see what I mean. I hope my advice helped. Im always a bit aprehensive about suggesting things cos you never know how someone is gonna take it. I am glad that you realised I wasnt trying to critisise your work though, cos I love this story so much. x
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I know what your talking about. I mean I have had other people read it that didn't know who was speaking. Well if ya got any questions let me know and I will answer them for you.
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Oh my God! Just tell her you flippin' love her already! There's no such things as "too soon." There were a few minor spelling errors, but nothing too special. You need to hurry up with the next chapter already. I command you! Okay, I don't command you but, please! lol I'll be a good girl and wait patiently, but you can't keep me waiting for too long sweetheart.


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Patience my dear. That time will come. I don't know if it is going to be the next chapter or not. I think I should hold it off a bit. Just to see how much you beg me.
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I do have patience, quite a bit of it so I will keep from begging you too terribly much. I couldn't let you win and get such satisfaction so soon. I will not give in soon. So put it off for as long as you wish.
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You can beg all you want. I know that I will get to it and you'll love what happens.
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I'm sure that I will love it anyways so no begging. Hmph!
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