Secret Radio Murders - Chapter 12


The storm rushed down from the mountainous upstate region of New York bringing cooler air, while it bathed the city proper in large splashing raindrops. Nature’s shower had come so quickly, rivers of sparkling water rolled over the sidewalks and down the curbs.1

Brad Benson darted from his car, across the parking lot, and into the side door of precinct 66. He’d finished up some paper work at his own desk this morning so he’d be free to join Farley. Powers That Be had decided the investigation should be worked out of 66 for reasons known only to them. Unprepared for the change in the weather, his thin shirt was quickly soaked and plastered against his skin changing its whiteness to pink. His coppery shaded hair had taken the heaviest dose of rain and now looked rusty as it leaked onto his shoulders. “Fucking weather,” he mumbled and shook himself like an irritated dog.2

Joe Farley had been coming from the evidence room. He paused in the hall to eye Benson and give a sharp laugh before he said, “Teach you to be late. I came in before seven—the sun was shinning then.”3

“Yeah…right.” Benson decided against making excuses even if they were the truth. He wasn’t giving Farley the edge by explaining his own actions. They held the same rank and were sharing responsibility for this investigation--damn if he’d let the older guy run the show.4

Farley shrugged. “Towels in the locker room,” he said. “I’ve got a dry shirt in my locker 216. You are welcome to use it. Offer pants.” He grinned as he let his eyes travel up Benson’s tall lean frame. “But you’d look weird in ‘High Waters’.”5

“Right,” Benson said but thought. ‘Weirder still holding them up with one hand.’6

“Your guys showed up on time,” Farley continued as he followed Benson into the locker room. “I put them to work. Tomaino’s parked on Goodwin until we finish checking him out and the rookie is on the computer doing traces on the Radio show’s personal. They have a young fellow, kind of a gofer, Josh Hammond I’m curious about.” 7

Benson retrieved a shirt from Farley’s emergency supply in locker 216. He checked the collar for the XL that seemed to be the modern equivalent of fits all and then pulled his own shirt off as Farley tossed him a towel. Rain, no matter how hot the temperature, tends to turn freezing when it connects with skin and Benson rubbed vigorously with the towel at goose bumped flesh.8

“I had Hayes and Hamlin pay a return visit to the crisis center early this morning. Figured they could question the crew that was on the night Michelle called,” Farley said. “Who’ll be tired, unprepared and less apt to be thinking up excuses.”9

“Makes sense.” Benson finished shoving the shirt into his waistband. “You got decent coffee around here?” 10

“It may turn your hair black, but it’s drinkable.” Farley preceded his new partner on a slight tour of the building. As they entered the operation center to locate a coffee machine, the officer on duty answered the ringing phone.11

“You got a call Joe,” the desk sergeant indicated with the receiver he held. “Shall I put it through to your office?”12

“I’ll take it here.” He set his cup down and stepped to the desk. “Sergeant Farley.” He acknowledged the caller.13

“Joe, this is Janet Mitchell, M. E.'s office." There was excitement in her voice. "As you know by my report, I was able to determine the same chemical mixture in similar amounts had killed those women?"14

Farley said, "Yes? Have you found something new?" 15

“I’m able to label the drug combination for you. We’ve isolated the brand. It's Norvasc a blood pressure medication. Fairly new on the market, there is no generic at this time."16

Blood pressure medicine? Farley pondered. A prescription drug?17

After a minute, Janet said, "Are you there?"18

"Yes, still here. By no generic, you mean it can only be purchased under the brand name?"19

"Precisely. And it isn’t a drug of choice to treat young, skinny, and active women. If these are assisted suicides, it has to be someone with access to a large amount of Norvasc.”20

Joe's heart skipped a beat. It was a major break. Was there another Dr. Kavorkian out there? Now they knew what had killed the women, they had to find out how that much of the drug was obtained and by who. "Janet, that's marvelous. I could kiss you."21

"Promises, promises." She giggled then became serious. “Joe, there isn’t a whole lot of ways to obtain large amounts of a prescription drug. No MD is going to proscribe a lethal dose. Pharmacies have buy and sell ledgers. Samples would mean a drug rep or doctor’s office connection.”22

"Thanks."23

"You're very welcome and I'm gonna hold you to that kiss."24

Benson left Farley with his phone call, and headed for the sergeant’s office. In an open anteroom before the offices started, he came upon a familiar face bent into a monitor. “How’s it going Cody?” He leaned down to study the screen. 25

The rookie looked up and grinned at his boss. “Thought you could ride tail, “ he said. “Farley’s got you beat three ways from tomorrow. My butt’s been glued to this chair since seven.”26

“Anything interesting?”27

“You can cross out Josh Hammond. He’s Oldman Connelly’s sister’s kid. Junior at Princeton, he’s only been in the city three weeks. I traced him back to high school. Carries a 3.9 average and is so squeaky clean he’s never had so much as a speeding ticket.”28

“Who else did you look into?”29

“Mark Gheil. The producer. He came from Los Angelus a year ago.—dirty book has it he made some costly goofs on a couple of movies—came here looking for a break in TV. He’s still trying there. He was producing a few weekly shows, when Connelly approached him about Harris’s talk show.”30

“Business—what about personal life?” Farley stopped beside them. He set a cup of black coffee next to the computer. “Figured you could use some.”31

Cody distastefully eyed the coffee but didn’t admit he’d prefer a Coke only said. “Gheil’s likes the ladies. He was only married for two years when his wife filed for divorce. Infidelity bought her a generous settlement. Then for about four years he operated a pretty active Bachelor pad with a swing shift. Seems last November he met a lady lawyer and not only does it seem an exclusive; but she moved in with him recently.”32

Farley let out a whistle and snickered. “You found all that out in a few hours without leaving that chair?” It wasn’t meant as a question. “Damn—give you a week and you can give us the complete background dirt on the Joint Chiefs.” 33

“Cody’s good,” Benson agreed. “Make hard copy on what you have.” He gave the rookie’s shoulder a light punch. “Drop it in the office. Then get out of here. Get yourself some lunch. You can tackle Harris when you get back.”34

“Harris?” Farley remarked as they walked down the hall of the detective division. Remodeling, a few years back, had created several walls of windows to allow daylight to cut down on the use of electricity. Every light brightly lit a desk area occupied or not twenty-four-seven. No one noticed.35

“If it wasn’t for Neil, I wouldn’t have got involved.”36

“The Doc’s your friend Joe,” Benson reached into the drawer of Joe’s desk and removed the smokeless astray. He tapped out a cigarette from the shinny green package. He was making himself to home. “Friends can outfox the fox. I’m not saying Harris has anything to do with the murders—believe me I’d like to clear him—the faster the better. The more we know didn’t do it the tighter becomes the group who may have.” Benson sat down at the desk next to Farley’s that’d been emptied out just that morning. He lit his Kool.37

“I ran Neil through records myself,” Farley said. “A couple of parking tickets he paid. Had a break-in a few times at his office. He doesn’t keep drugs there, so they vented their anger and didn’t take much. That’s New York.” 38

“He’s a Psychiatrist—a licensed professional means he can write prescriptions.”

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  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    July 26
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    Great

    Two good men working together, how will the bad cop keep his head above water? We shall see.

    • Yep!

      Farley and Benson are pretty good together. Sort of feeling each other out in the beginning. It takes a little time to know how to work with another person.

      Andy

  • Marta gold member
    June 16

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    If all or a few of the women were molested it should have shown up in the M.E.'s report even if there was no semen or other fluids present. It would have been a secondary clue if and even if they weren't, natural sex and forced sex does show a marked difference on the body. That the same drug was used in all the women, should make the cops want to go back and compare similarities (spelled wrong) in all the caseso the women look alike,share any feature that makes the suspect want to mark them and stuff like that. They seem to have case files but,most times the task force sets up a room and has the women's photos and death information on a board for comparison as well as their location of residence and work place. To kind of narrow it down as to where they could have met the suspect and what the women might have in common. Little details like this makes the whole picture come together and the scenes more real. Good writing though.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

    • Hmm?

      Well, we'll see what you think as the story continues. This is somewhat implied in the story.

      Andy

  • graybeard silver member
    May 10

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    Once again someone has already did the proof reading chore, so I'll just move along to the next chapter.

    • Hi!

      Yes, Irish looked the early chapters over very well. I actually have not caught up with her on this draft, though I believe we're catching most of our mistakes on the second draft.

      Thanks for following our story and all the applause.

      Andy


  • IrishYndina Greeters member
    August 22, 2008
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    I'm so behind - I suppose that's what happens when I volunteer to help out with everything. No time to read or write for myself. I actually liked this chapter, even though it wasn't a high-action section. We learn a lot, both about the investigation and about the characters and how they interact. The power struggle is subtle, but makes for an interesting background for the investigation. Things are moving well, though I feel sorry for these poor cops - they're not even close yet. *laughs*

    Notes:

    * Para 3: I think in this context, "paperwork" is one word.

    * Para 4: "the sun was shinning then." Something tells me you actually meant "shining."

    * Para 6: "Offer pants." I would try this: "I'd offer pants..." He grinned... The ellipsis will help connect that bit of dialogue to his next bit, and the "I'd" makes it more clear - as is, it sounds like a command. "Hey you, offer some pants already."

    * Para 8: You don't need to capitalize "radio." Also, I think you mean "personnel" and not "personal." There is a very definite difference. *laughs* As for rain always feeling cold, I beg to differ; apparently you've never been in a rainstorm in 90 degree weather with 300% humidity.

    * Para 12: "his new partner" - only temporary partner, right?

    * Para 17: You might try a comma between "It's Norvasc" and "a blood presure medication."

    * Para 23: "proscribe a lethal dose." I believe you mean "prescribe." Also, no doctor ever prescribes a lethal dose, though often if someone takes all of the pills for the entire week it will do the job. *laughs*

    * Para 27: You have a space before the quotation mark after "ride tail."

    * Para 31: "Los Angelus" is spelled incorrectly - I doubt those Californians would appreciate it. Also, there's a period after "a year ago" that I don't think you need.

    * Para 33: Get rid of the "only said" after Coke and you'll have a fine example of a sentence. Also, no need for the possessive apostrophe in "Gheil's" and take a moment to recheck your semicolon.

    * Para 37: If you move this dialoge to the end of the previous paragraph, it will be clear that Farley is still speaking.

    * para 3: "shinny green package" - "shiny" please.

    * Hm...this chapter ends rather abruptly. I see what you're trying to do, but I think it could be done without making it seem quite so...well, abrupt. *laughs*

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      August 23, 2008

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      Hi Irish!

      It's good to have you reading again. Thanks for staying with us. We appreciate you.

      It looks like you've found several things that need correcting. It's funny how I can read over our mistakes so easily. Thanks for pointing them out.

      Andy

      • IrishYndina Greeters member
        August 23, 2008

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        It's much harder to catch your own mistakes than somone else's - believe me. I never see my own typos. *laughs*

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