She cried as she told me why she hated me.1
"I hate you! I hate you for what you make me feel. You change me, make me better, and I hate you for it. You make me cry and laugh and smile and think! I hate you because I need you; because I want you so much I can't breathe. I hate you...because I love you."2
I smile and pulled her close. "Don't worry, I hate you, too."
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hahah lolzzz
the ending was kinda funny
but the quote touched me. So beautifully said. I loved it!
It is also written well... beautiful! ^^
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awwwwwww i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Dani
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aww that was so sweet! I loved it... and it was very sad and happy at the same time awesome job!
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This is so sweet!
It written so well and with such emotions.
I love it!
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Hi! I'm Sarah, and thanks for entering my contest.
This was beautiful. And short. And I read it about four times and I still love it. It's simple, and I know a lot of people feel this way...I know I do. You used really common words in this- hate, cry, laugh, smile, breathe...all words we use daily without thinking, but you, as a writer, have given them a new meaning. You have connected them together with one word: love.
A couple of mistakes:
*"I Hate you! I hate you for..."*"....You change me, make me beter, and I hat eyou for it..."
*'I smile and pulled her close.'
Good luck in my contest! I'm adding you to the finalist 'cause you did such an awesome job. Have a great day-
-♥sarahbeth
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awww
thats hatefully adorable!
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adorably non-hateful
I have to agree with Addy !!
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