Do you ever check up on me,1
just to see if I'm ok?2
Do you ever think of me?3
Do you ever wonder what 4
could have been?5
Do you remember all the 6
plans we made?7
Do you ever look at my picture?8
Do you remember when I said9
I would love you forever?10
I do...11
Do you?
Author notes
Just want to know if its any good. I wrote it for my ex who I love alot and miss.
A contest entry
- Sing Me A Song by lexiconsthedevil.
130 points, ended June 13, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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yess i do remember idc if this wasnt for me but i luv u alot even look at my name that tells u alot! yes i do think of u all the time every night i even cry alot cuz i miss u so much!!!! and yes i do remember when u said that u would luv me 4ever cuz ill luv u 4ever 2 XD!!! and now im putting up a story to answer the questions ok lol!!!
luv ya!!! =)
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Not good...
...but GREAT! I love this. It really has a meaning and I can understand clearly what you're saying through this. Sorry to be all philosophical on you, but I tend to ramble.
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