Boy.


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 *Look at me2

What do you see3

Something burdened deep inside4

Wanting to be set free*5

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23, 2008

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    O.M.G it's that kid all grown up: from what movie was it????!!??? (AH YES ABOUT A BOY) you scallywagger you...
    brilliant...again so short and simple but told so much it was impossible not to see what you were trying to show us.

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  • creationsfromheart
    April 21, 2008
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    Beautifully written in so few words nicely done


  • Adelaide Blood
    April 20, 2008
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    good job

    it was short and sweet but still good! great job!


  • RxxSpiritWolfxxJ
    April 19, 2008
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    Short and to the point. Love this!!


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    Good analysis

    So much hidden from view. As I said on one of your other pieces, I like this style and this works well. All of us scream out for something...wish I could sing; wish I could dance; play sports; or even be something that no one sees...inside.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • V l
    April 18, 2008
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    Hot love that photo short and sweat

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