The Way of the Hitman

ACT I: The Barbie Doll1

I move seizing victims in dark. Confused and pathetic they are. No respect for anything. They are all around the world shouting “kill me!” “Kill me!” They quarrel on petty things and rush in battles without thinking, don’t they know that one day there are going to find someone like me who is going to put them out of their misery? Don’t they know that it is their destiny? If they do why do they still run? It just wastes time. Don’t they know that I am going to get them? Don’t they know that it is inevitable? I am the Hitman and there is no man on earth that can escape from me, for I am death.2


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Hayrick repeated the words in his mind. Then he calmly got up from the chair he was sitting on and went toward the drawers. From the middle drawer he extracted a small steal brief case.4

Then he set the right combination on it ‘666’ the number of the devil himself. The suitcase opened with a ‘crank’ sound. From inside it he extracted a long gun. He took it out and carefully examined it’s shiny surface. Then he took out the silencer and attached it to the gun.5

With the gun fully loaded, he opened the room’s door. Inside there was a chair on which a bloody bruised old man was tied with chains.6

“Mr. Hitman I have made my decision. I will tell you everything but please don’t kill me I beg you.”7

“I have changed my mind Rooney.”8

“No please.” He pleaded with tears in his eyes.9

Hayrick brought the gun up resting it on his forehead. A small sound and a jet of blood came oozing from his head and mouth. Some of the drops fell on his face. He put the gun on the chair and went inside the bathroom.10

There he turned on the tap and look at his reflection in the mirror. His expressions were the same as usual; there were no expression on his face just cold numbness. His hazel eyes looked back at him from the mirror pitying on his condition. His hairs, which were usually in a perfect normal hold, were messed up a bit. Bits of hair had grown on his chin and his cheeks had hollowed. He had lost weight.11


He was busy examining his appearance when the phone rang. He took it out of his pocket and checked it. It was Mr. Bradley12

“So Hayrick, is it done?” 13

“Yes Mr. Bradley it’s done.”14

There was a wicked grin of satisfaction on the man’s face.15

“Excellent!”16

Hayrick replaced the mobile back in his pocket. Seeing the condition of his cloths. He decided to take a shower.17

Once he was done with it he went towards the parking lot and took his car. His flight wasn’t due in another 5 hours. First he thought of waiting for his flight on the airport but then he saw something on the bus stop that caught his attention.18

It was a girl in late teens. She had short blonde hairs; she was quite tall with a dazzling figure and a beautiful face.19

He immediately stopped his car. Seeing the expensive sports car all the call girls got gathered around it. All of them, except the one that had caught his attention.20

He signaled her to come by. She came in a pathetic attempt to catwalk. This greatly amused him.21

“Get in the car.”22

“But let me tell you…..” but he cut her short. 23

“Get in the car.” He repeated.24

First she hesitated then she opened the door and got it. He immediately accelerated the car and they were off. 25

“There a good cheap motel near by…….” But she was cut short again.26

“Just shut up and do as I say.”27

“What the fuck?”28

“Mr. Bradley wishes to see you.”29

“I am not going to meet any Mr. Bradley get it!”30

“You have no choice.”31

“I am not taking this anymore.” She said opening the door slightly.
“If you’re not going to listen to me I will shoot you.” He said pointing a gun towards him.32

She closed the door shaking from head to toe she didn’t dare trying to do anything like jumping from the car again.33

After driving for some hours they finally reached Bradley Mansion.34

“Get out now and do as I say slowly.” Said Hayrick.35

She didn’t dare argue and went inside the mansion with him.36

There were guards outside the door they let Hayrick pass but only after they had taken his guns.37

After entering the mansion Hayrick made way straight towards Mr. Bradley’s room.38

He knocked the door. “Come inside.” came a voice from the room.39

He went in there was Mr. Bradley sitting on his bed.40

“Hayrick I didn’t expected you for hours. Oh! You brought Barbie Doll with you, always one step ahead my expectation you are Hayrick.”41

When Hayrick didn’t reply he turned his attention towards the girl42

“So how are doing bitch!” said Bradley, slapping the girl so hard that she bled from the mouth.43

“Blackmail me will you?” He said giving her another slap.44

“Blackmail! You’re the father of my baby Roger take some responsibility.” She said through her tears.45

“You sleep with God know how many men a day. It in your blood! Fucking whores!”46

“Fuck you asshole!” She said, with in a second she was on the floor and roger was kicking her like a mad man.47

“Sir, please……sir……listen…… please sir…. she’s not in the condition… sir please.”48

Then suddenly Roger took out his gun. “I am going to kill you bitch!” he said pointing it towards her.49

Without realizing what he was doing, Hayrick immediately he tried to snatch the gun from him.50

A loud bang and suddenly Roger fell on the floor. A pool of blood was unleashed from his body.51

Hayrick heard some movement outside the door they had to go now.52

“We need to go.” He said calmly to the girl who was staring the body in horror.53

They went out from the window sneaking behind the bushes. Suddenly loud noises of shock came from the house. They must have discovered the body, Hayrick thought. He needed to make haste.54

Suddenly three men came from up front and spotted them.55

They ran for Hayrick. He dodged the first then he kicked the second away and got hold of his throat. A weird noise came as he twisted his throat. He dropped dead immediately.56

Hayrick took his gun shot another. Narrowly avoided a bullet, he banged the third’s head to the stonewall nearby. Blood came gushing out of his head as he dropped dead as well.57

Hayrick and the girl moved ahead until their car came in view. Soon they heard barks, the dogs had been set free to look for them.58

His mind working furiously there were some nine guards around the cars.59

“Look” he said to the girl “I will draw the guard’s attention to myself while you’ll have to sneak and get to the car.”60

With these words he came out in the open and open fired on the guards. Barbie rushed avoiding the bullets, she got to the car in time.”61

With a loud noise the car came toward Hayrick and the guards jumped here and there to avoid it. Afterwards the guards try to fire on the car but it didn’t have much effect on it.62

Hayrick rushed inside, “Go! Go! GO!” he yelled.63

Barbie accelerated toward the main gate. Seeing this some of the other guard closed it but the car rushed breaking the gate64

After driving for some time, Barbie said, “I think we have lost them.”65

“I hope so.” Said Hayrick.66

“That’s it, I’ll go on from here myself.” She said stopping the car.67

Hayrick also came out ready to take the driver seat.68

Suddenly she hugged him “Thank you so much.”69

Hayrick was in some shock when suddenly he let out a soft whimpering noise. He had been stabbed in the stomach.70

He looked at her face in horror, warm blood gushed out of his veins.71

Hayrick fell on the street. Darkness was spreading, his vision was becoming blur.72

Barbie took out her phone and dialed a number. “It’s done both of them are dead.”73

“Excellent Nora you have done a near impossible job. I am pleased.”74


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  • Hermanator1 silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    Good twist

    I didn't see it coming! Only problem is I read it from your entry in my circle of friends and now I know who you are! Ha ha. So much for anonymous!
    I'll judge it when I get back to the contest page.
    Thanks

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.