Through all the lies that you've decieved
My broken heart is all I've grieved1
You made me hurt, you made me cry
But in the end you made me die2
I'm stranded here and all the while
I'm abandoned here in innocent exile3
You didn't mean the things you've said
And the next day you found me dead4
Lying on the floor with a bottle in my hand
And a note in the other so you understand5
Author notes
Contrary to popular belief, I am not depressed! And no I am not going to kill myself...it's just a poem. Nothing more!!!
Ummm...haha
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Very well written and emotional. You can feel this girl's pain and suffering through it. Great job! Off to read more of your works!
~Linds.
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i like this. and omg cupcakes rule!!!!!!!! they're all i EVER talk about in my english class.... ishoulda made my username on cupcakes...
good poem 
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Anyways...you know what! I'm GOING to see Kung-Fu Panda, whether you go with me or not! SNIFF SNIFF!
OH! And also! Stephenie Meyer has a new Twilight Movie website! It's so cool! I went on it today! They got some sexeh pictures of Robert Pattison (Edward) and I also found out today who was playing Charlie! BILLY BURKE! -
dang!!
This is sad :[ but it's brilliant! This is how I felt when my ex broke up with me...lol he meant so much to me.
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Awh...
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Nathalie is depressed!?
Who said that about my wifie!?
Does I gotta go do some kung-fu action on their asses (btw, pleeeeeeease come to that movie with me!!!)!!!
Haha, anyways, super good Nat! I loves all your poems!!!! -
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I love you Evan!
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lol i liked that
it was really well written with a wonderful flow and a meaning that hits close to home for some! good job!
p.s: its spelled deceived -
Luvyas
Short - but emotional - and deatailed - just the way I like 'em.
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Wow...that is one intense write right there! I love it...and I have been one to write depressing works even when I am not depressed. Great write! Good job!
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Intense. Very Intense. Yeah..I don't think you're depressed, but what I do know is that you write really well!
But the fact that you write depressing poems (
) Just kidding.
Oh..I love the rhyming, too. I can't rhyme to save my life.
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A very nice poem might I add. Sometimes the deepest of messages lie here in the shortest of poems. Very deep and compelling, it was easy to read and easy to understand. Your vocabulary choice makes the sentances flow very nicely. A job well done
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