Diaries of a Girl in Love #2

Dear Diary,1

He always says "I don't know what you see in me or how you have ever fallen for me, but i'm glad you did" Well little does he know, I see someone who genuinely cares about me. I see someone who I care for back, with all my heart.2

I see a guy who isn't afraid to be himself. I see a guy who can pick me up when I'm down. I see a guy who can make all my problems seem to just melt away. I see a guy who doesn't expect much, and who doesn't ask for anything. I see a guy who just wants to live his life in a fun way. 3

I see a man who's way more mature than he thinks. I see a man who's probably analyzing this down to a tee and asking himself "why?" for each thing Ive written. I see a man who wants a family in the future, a family he can love and care for. I see a man who i'm completely head over heels in love with. I see a man who I want to spend the rest of my life with. 4

I see a boyfriend who would do anything for me. I see a boyfriend who's so amazing, sometimes i wonder if I'm a good girlfriend. I see a boyfriend who would talk to me all night if he could. I see a boyfriend how notices small things about me i never knew. I see a boyfriend who I love to an insane amount.5

I see a lot.6

I see him, and that's all I need. 7

From, a Girl In Love.

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100% true.

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  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    April 17

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    Awww....love the progress from boy to man to the whole future thing, and the cute summary at the end.

    Ell done. Beautiful and heartfelt.

    HT


  • KeasbeyMornings
    April 16

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    It's always nice to see a 100% true love story. It gives me hope that humans still have the capability for compassion. I like this piece. Sans a typo or two, the writing itself is flawless. The storyline is typical - a man and a woman fall in love - but the execution makes it what it is. If you haven't already, you should definitely tell your boyfriend how you feel. It's the greatest feeling in the world to hear that come from somebody.

    Keep it up.

    -Keasbey


    • FearlessChic
      April 16
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      Thankyou so much. If my boyfriend didnt know how i felt, he doesnt now. SinceI know he read it. Anyways, I highly appreciate the comment. Thanks again <3