The Nightmare Mistress's Riot

Raged and angered
You want to kill
Encounterable and danerous
Looking out the window sill.1

Walking at night
Dressed in black
Hold me tight
I might never come back.2

First step of darkness
You watch silently
The Nightmare Mistress
You follow stealthly.3

Your fangs gleam red
Eyes narrow
"I won't hurt you." you said
Quickly, your fangs burrow.4

Blood gone
You watch me fall
My life is gone
You've done it all.5

Next morning
You are asleep
Voice ringing
Your rage sinks deep when you realize...6

It's a riot.

Author notes

At the time of writing, I was listening to "Riot" and "Animal I Have Become" by Three Days Grace.

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  • Twilight-Lover
    May 3
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    Love It!

    I love Three Days Grace!! Tehe I love the way your poem flows. It's Awesome


  • Glowstarcharmer
    April 17

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    Wow this was really good. I dont know the songs you were refering to with this poem but I really enjoyed it all the same. It had a kind of sureal feeling to it, sort of creepy like a dream or something. I dont know if this was what you were trying to get across but that is how it seemed to me. I think this atmosphere was achieved by the way the line length subtly varies, not so much that it doent flow, but just enough to give it that haunting feeling. Well done.

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