Chapterr 27 of tThose Continuing Adventures of Trixie tthe Pesky Mouse !

Chapter 27 of those Continuing Adventures1

of Trixie the Pesky Mouse ! Trixi e wants to 2

Crash the Gala that President Bush is having 3

Pope Benedict XVI in Washington DC !4

W. Peter Sanci April 15 / 20085

Well hi there my friends, I think I have one of the best Trixie’s yet for you today.6

You see that little vixen has got it into her head to visit7

Her old friend Pope Benedict when he is in Washington 8

DC at the White House , with her other old friend President Bush.9

Remember she has met both in previous adventures.10

So off she goes to her travel agent to book a trip t o Washington DC.11

“ Well, well she says to herself, how am I going to crash a White House Black Tie Affair ? ” 12

Then the answer came to her in a flash. “ I will just go and pretend to be a waitress, and then when I see His Holiness and President Bush, they will invite me in. ”13

Her plan sounded fine to her so off she went. She had to borrow a waitress uniform.14

That being done , she then had to get close enough for 15

either one of them to notice it was her, 16

She carefully picked up a tray of ordure’s and started to 17

Walk up to the head table. 18

Before she got very far she was surrounded by a group of CIA body guards and ushered away from the banquet hall.19

“ Well this is another fine old mess I’ve gotten myself into. ” she said to herself almost in tears.20

“ How am I going to get myself out of this one. ” “Lord ,21

she begins to pray, if you get me out of this one I promise never to get into trouble again ! ”22

And wouldn’t you know it who walked into the 23

room just then ?24

Her good old friend President Bush, he was wondering what all the commotion was ?25

When he saw Trixie , he gave out a big Teaxan smile,26

and said. “ I see you have gotten yourself into another 27

pickle, Miss Mouse. ” 28

” Can I be of assistance ? ” “ You sure can Mr. President, ” Trixie replied, “ Get me out of here, ”29

“ Yes at once ! ” Mr. Bush , ordered the CIA agents to release Trixie immediately.30

And then he took her by the arm and walked into the banquet hall. 31

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  • Natalie-
    April 20, 2008
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    All the dialogue was great - punctuated well, but I think you need more detail in your story; Like why she was going to visit the President and the Pope and if she is a mouse then why can she talk? Maybe you should have entered the first chapter instead of the twenty-seventh. I will have a look at the rest when Iv'e finished with the contest.

    • Pietro456
      May 23, 2008
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      Andy !

      Thanks for the nice comment ! Don't give up the ship ! Miss Right will come along when you least expect her.. Take it from me !

    • Pietro456
      May 23, 2008
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      CharisCrouch !

      It's a story, I can amake anything I want to happen or not ! Thanks for takng the time to comment.

  • Pietro456
    April 15, 2008
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    My Best Yet !