Drake:1
I was standing in the cold weather in the Chicago suburbs on Gollen Bridge. Freddy should have been here by now. In my blue jeans and white tee and black corset. In my dicolored and numb fingers was a cigarette, unlit. I pulled the cigarette to my lips and tried to light my cig. Of course, it did not work. I started to walk down the 1 1/2 mile bridge across Wile river. I walked at a slow pace toward Littlest Big Shop on Clarence and Broadside. The Littlest Big Shop is a bar where I work as a bartender. I walk in and order a double from Cassie. As I gulp down the alcohol, I look around for someone to dance with. 2
Freddy:3
God damn it! I forgot all about Drake at the Gollen bridge. I tore through the house to get in my Ford pick-up. I wemt from 0-60 in less than a minute. I drove for about 10 minutes and reached the Gollen Bridge. I payed a toll and proceeded to the 3/4 mile mark. Drake was no where in sight. I still drove on and decided to search Littlest Big Shop for Drake. When I arrived I saw her.4
Drake: 5
I was feeling great working on my day off. I was shaking and dancing and bumpin' and grindin' and having fun. The booze seemed to get to me even though i didnt feel anything until I felt a tug on the back of my work top. A lot can happen in just a few minutes it seems cause I was in the bar on minute and in Freddy's car the next. 6
"Hey, Freddy, You finally showed up. I was REAL worried that you wouldnt show so I-"7
"No need for explanation Drake. I was supposed to show and I didnt. All I am worried about is the way you feel right now. " Freddy said getting concerned.
Author notes
the lyrics to I'm With You by Avril Lavigne
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