Her face was sweet and beautiful 1
Pale in the moonlight 2
Her open mouth a pretty pink 3
Wavy,thick,rich,brunette hair4
Skin that glowed slightly golden 5
Wearing a long,velvet dress,on her skinny body 6
She was at a wakeless sleep 7
Her eyes looking at who was once there 8
And he stood there looking at the beauty 9
A man who just got in 10
Amazed that a woman coul have such beauty 11
He 12
sighed 13
deeply 14
The woman was killed 15
But her beauty lived on
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best Poetry! by HopelesslyInLove.
200 points, ended April 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Is the story OK, and/or original?
Comments
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Luvyas
THANNNNNK YOUUUUUUU!!!!! I LOVE comments ! Thank you again for a NICE comment!!!!!!!!!!! -
Wow, this has amazing potential! You have a great imagination, and it was very unique and beautiful. Thanks for entering and good luck!
*KAT* -
Luyas
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