Aliens...Unite!

This is a life of an alien.1

She goes by the name of2

RT-2K3

One day I4

Walked passed her5

And said,6

"Hi."7

She gave me a look8

That I couldn't possibly read.9

A scoff was her answer in return.10

'Fine.' 11

I thought.12

I walked down the sidewalk,13

And turned to look at her.14

She did the same.15

A smile crept on her face16

As a frown on mine.17

She smiled again,18

More of a deadly smile.19

I got what she wanted.20

A competition that is.21

My frown22

Turned into23

Another smile.24

Not just an ordinary one.25

Sadistic smile.26

We stared at each other,27

A deadly smiling contest28

And a staring contest too.29

It took all day,30

And I was sure I would lose by now.31

A flicker in the shadow32

Made my eyes blink.33

She laughed at me34

And said,35

"Boy, you can't think."

Author notes

I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this...but yeah. It's stupid, I know. I seem to have come up with bad poems lately...

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  • Immortal Flesh
    April 18, 2008

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    No don't ever call your stuff stupid. See you want to know where the beauty is when you read other peoples work? Is that its not the same crap over and over you read from others. This is why I have to say this write is very unique! Thts where the beauty is, in the way you wrote it!
    I'm thinking maybe the next staring smiling contest the human can win this time lol
    Maybe I don't know
    This is very coincidence because yesterday I was reading about UFo's and aliens, on a site tht showed pictures and videos. I was hooked all day lookin at tht site!
    Anyway Good job! I'm giving you 3 applauses because this is strange weird, but entertaining read all the same!!!


    • feelalive9
      March 26
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      thanks

      thanks for your comment. i appreciate it a lot.
      and that is kind of ironic. lol!


  • Glowstarcharmer
    April 17, 2008

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    Hehe, well it may be stupid but its was still fun to read and by no means does it make it a bad poem. There is far too much stuff on here that takes itself too seriously and it is refreshing to read a poem that is more light hearted, like one about losing a smiling competition to an alien... very random but funny none the less. Good work hun. Your work isnt bad, and writing should be about having fun anyway. Keep it up.

    X Amber X


    • feelalive9
      March 26
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      thanks

      haha thanks for your comment.
      i appreciate it. and yea, i'll have fun writing.