hidden reality

Her eyes are dry1

her heart.. still weeping2

Her Mind awake3

Her body still sleeping4

in her dreams her life is happy5

in reality her life is terrifying6

in her head she hears his sweet voice7

in the reality she hears him lying8

She tries to pretend that life is a joke9

that every thing that happens is nothing but a dream10

but she doesn't understand that it's really alive11

her life isn't a dream it *is* what it seams12

every night she lies down to sleep13

she falls into a hole that's continuously deep14

she falls and falls until her troubles are gone15

she falls until some one catches her or seems to care16

her eyes awake she can see what she's done17

the reality is hidden but the reality is there18

Author notes

not actually finishecd i guess

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  • AnaisBlack
    January 3, 2005
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    Dude, I didn't even know you had this one in your collection thingy of poems. I really like it... is this the poem you think you lost?

  • Itsalie
    January 1, 2005
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    good

    Very much like poor Alice down the rabbit hole.

    A good poem
    thanks,
    Talia