I’m unsure about his idea, the roof doesn’t look too safe. With an animal skill he claims the wall as if it was a piece of cake. I am amazed by his muscles, tan body, light blonde hair and happy personality. He’s already at the top of the roof looking down at me with a friendly smile. I’m standing there on the balcony in my white summer dress and I wonder how I should act.1
He gives me a helping hand and that’s when my own reaches his. As he firmly closes my small porcelain hand in his I feel an army of butterflies race through my body. Suddenly a smile and a desire of an adventure appears within me. I put my left feet against the wall to support myself and with the grace of a cat I claim the wall to find myself sitting next to him on the violet roof.2
Maybe I should let go of his hand now but he’s not doing anything to suggest I should do so. We’re close to each other, just bathing in the sweet colours of this amazing sunset.3
A contest entry
- Short and Swe-... hmm... by Midnightmare.
350 points, ended May 4, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is a good short write. It sounds like something I'd write. It would also be interesting to add on to this someday, but what you have for now is really good! You described the guy well.
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Hey, thank you ^^
Yea, I might add on to this one, but it is more likely that I'll create a completely new story based on those two characters ^^ . I don't know. Or I might just be lazy and leave it... we'll see hahah
Thanks once again ^^
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Great little mini story within this short piece of writing... descriptions were really good. I especially liked the way you said you supported yourself against the wall with the grace of a cat. that was really good.
Thanks so much for entering and good luck!
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