Mishap

It was Monday morning. The cold breeze numbed her face as she walked to wards the bus stop for school. She had been away for a week before because she was unwell and now she had to get used to getting up at such an early time and waiting at the bus stop for any amount of time. At least she had her friends with her to chat to. that was a plus.1

She was just metres away from her stop when she passed another bus stop before hers. An older teenager stood up to talk to her, (she was one of her friends sisters) "Are you going to school?" The older girl asked, whilst staring at her in confusion. 2

"Yeah. Unfortunately I am.. Why?" 3

"You don't have school today" The older girl laughed.4

Unfortunately for the poor girl she was in her full school uniform so she had to walk home with everyone staring at her. 5

"This is just great" she muttered to herself sarcastically.

Author notes

This really happened and it was funny at the time. It happened to me and it wasn't embarrassing, but i thought i would make the character seem embarrassed if you can notice. I hope ya enjoy.

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  • DarkOneShadow
    April 22, 2008
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    Oops... well it happens

    Hehe... sometimes illness can make everything seem off. Good luck in the contest.


  • RxxSpiritWolfxxJ
    April 15, 2008
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    I get the picture.

    Good luck in my contest.


    • Bubbles--
      April 15, 2008
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      Thanks. There were two other stories but yeah i didn't think of them until after i wrote this lol. Well i am glad i entered your contest