They returned with the cold whipping through the air. Once inside Chris came over to Bella again, "So what shall we do for the rest of the night?" He smirked.1
"You always think like that, I for one, am going out to the park."2
"What is so special about that damn park?!"3
Bella's thoughts ran to the other night when she had strolled through and saw a man sitting by himself. What made her notice him so much, was that he had hair, of silver silk, and his eyes were so brown that they looked black. She walked around him and noticed that he looked up at her. When she had smiled at him, he had asked her to sit. They started talking like this often, and it was making Chris jealous, although he knew nothing of this prince.4
"I just have to be alone sometimes Chris," she kissed him as not to raise any questions. 5
He just lightly smiled back and kissed her again. "Well, whatever makes it so important, is obviously making you happy, maybe that'll make me happy," he smerked again, only to recieve a light smack, just to tease.6
"I'll be back in a little while," and with that she left.7
Author notes
have I shocked anyone? any suggestions? anyone? *waves cookie* come on...
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good
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thanks for the typo inform, I was over at a friends and was trying to hurry up, thats how come its short, and... now perfect. lol.
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YES! The mystery of it makes me want to read more. Which I shall do...*scuttles off to read more*
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And you add an interesting new character to the mix. I like the description, silver hair with brown eyes. This was short, but hints of more. ((ps, don't mean to be picky, but it's spelled smirked. little typo, no big deal.))I look forward to more.
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I LOVE IT!! YES YES YES
Meg
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