Glimmering moon1
Full in the sky2
Silver cast strewn3
In rippled water of wry4
Through forest trees5
Runs a frantic deer6
Icy cold breeze7
Eyes widened in fear8
Stalking close behind9
The pack nears its prey10
A deer's racing mind11
They wish to slay12
Bloodied claws tear13
Pure white fangs snap14
Long ruffled gray hair15
Leave the deer a mere scrap16
A ominous low howl17
Sounds through the woods18
Entwined in coos from an owl19
Beauty is misunderstood
Author notes
I wrote it for the contest, but I don't think it can compare to most of the others...
A contest entry
- Wolf poems! by HaXXoR.
350 points, ended June 2, 2008, 15 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
I don't think it's as good as others in the contest, but I gave it a try... What do you think?
Comments
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very special. i really liked this one. it had me staring at the screen. great job. i dont know what more to say... really special
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Hay beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I think you did some really beautiful wording with this poem..
It was rather enchanting really.
I love wolves and anything as beautiful as these creatures:)
*applause*
Blair !!
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