The Storm (lame third grade story I found)

Once apon a time, there was a girl named Vicky. She liked being with her freinds and math. Vicky had a best-friend named Alyse. Alyse was nice and liked the same things Vicky did, so that is why she was friends with Vicky. 1

“Hello Alyse would you like to sleep-over tonight.” Vicky said on the phone.2

“Okay I will be right over!” Alyse replied. She lived one-block away so she would be there verry soon.3

“Oh its you Alyse! Come in please.” Vicky answered the door to her best-friend.4

“Hi there we are going to have fun tonight!” Alyse said.5

“Yes now lets set up.” 6

They set up and then went down-stairs to watch a movie that was called The Grudge it was very scarry! So they were trying to go to bed and then there was a noise Vicky said, “Oh-no, Alyse its a storm!” 7

And Alyse said. “Oh-no! We will be okay though.” 8

“Me-ow,” said Vicky’s new little kitten he was small so small he only wayed 3 lb and he was named Jack. “Me-ow.” And then there was the dog Heinrick, “Arff.” He was a ferrocious big dog and he was some-times meen to you!9

“We need to get out we are only home alone you see!” Vicky said she was panicking!10

“Oh shut-up will you we will be just fine.” Alyse said she did not care.11

“Me-ow,” said Jack which was probly kitten langwage for “Help lets get out! DANGER.” 12

“Poor kitty is scarred.” Vicky picked up her kitten and rubbed his wittle nose against her face it was very cold and not soft like his cheeks!13

“He is maybe we SHOULD get out do you think so Vicky?” Alyse is starting to get worried!14

“Of-course. But we should try to call some peeple and see if they can help us.” Vicky answered. 15

“Okay,” Alyse picks up the phone and dialed her aunties number. OH-NO! “She didn’t answer Vick!!!!!”16

“Ack! Call your mom ok?” 17

“Ok.” Alyse dialed the other number and it was DEAD! “Boohoo, boohoo,” weeped Alyse. “I am too tired and maybe my mommy is not answering be-cause she is asleep you know Vick?”18

“Okay, lets look at how bad this storm is and then maybe we can go outside and run to neighbors house.” Vicky pulled the curtain on the window and gasped. “OH-NO!” There were big flashes of very white and scarry looking lightning and that scarred the girls very much!!!19

“RAAAABBBBBBOOOOOMMMM!” THUNDER, OH-NO! 20

“What are we going to do Alyse??? ARE WE GOIN TO DIE?”21

“Nooo! Were not gonna die Vick. Stay calm.” Alyse said. “You know something Vick maybe we should go to bed?”22

“Alright.” Vicky and Alyse climbed into the bed and whispered stuff like who was the cutest boy ever! And then there was another noise and that also scarred the girls. “ACK!”23

“Oh its okay Vick stay calm okay.” Alyse said.24

“NO! IT’S THE GRUDGE!!!” 25

“DONT LET IT GET YOUU!” Alyse shouted.26

And then there was a bark, and tehn the noise all stopped. Vicky turned on the light, “OH HEINRICK YOU SAVED US!!!” Heinrick has killed the Grudge!27

“ARFF!” Doggy langwage for “I know I am so awsome.” 28

“Me-owwwwww!” That was for “You are the best and there is no more DANGER.”29

“YAY! Its gone!” Alyse jumped up-and-down. 30

“Lets call our moms.” 31

So they called their moms and told them but they did not beleve there dawters. Oh-no!32

“But, Mom! Heinrick he did it he saved us we could be dead but he saved us!” Vicky claimed to her mommy.33

“I do not beleve you.” Then Vicky’s mom did a terible thing! She turned in her dawter and her best-friend to the police!34

“We do not beleve that their is such a thing called the Grudge. You have to go to jail be-cause we think you two girls killed the person in Vickys room so go to jail.” Said Police Chief.35

Even though every-thing that happened on that nite of the storm was TRUE nobody beleved them and so they lived their lives in JAIL…36

THE END 37