Straight to video - Scene 3 - PRT 2


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Int.Classroom.Day
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Blake walks into the classroom late, and takes a seat.
The teacher hands him a detention slip.
He takes a seat, when a girl has taken his usual seat.
He sits next to her, giving her a frown.
The teacher introduces her to the class; Her name is Hazel.
Blake asks her why did she just not sit with the girls.
He looks to see them giving her bad looks.
He feels compelled and tells her its okay to be friends


BLAKE3

walks into the classroom.
With his head down.
He looks up at the clock and is fifteen minutes late.4

TEACHER5

Late again I see Mr Oxford?6

Teacher frowns.
Steeping out behind his desk.
He leans over the desk
Raises his eyebrows.7

What is your excuse this time?8

BLAKE9

Lowers his head.
trying to avoid the question.10

TEACHER11

Oh please do not tell me it's you Mother again.12

BLAKE13

Nods.
Not knowing what to say.
Takes a few deep breaths.
Looks up at the teacher.14

Look if you're going to give me a detention would you just go ahead and do it?
I am really not in the mood for bullshit this morning.
I already have had enough to last me a lifetime. 15

(Classroom erupts in gasps and laughter)16

TEACHER

Frowns angrily.
Quiet, or you will all be joining Mr Oxford in detention.
Scribbles on a sheet of paper.
Hands it to Blake.17


BLAKE18

Swipes it from the teachers hands.
Shoves it in his pocket.19

TEACHER20

Leans forward into Blake's ear.21


I expect you to be there every afternoon.
I know your mother seems to be an reoccurring problem.
You're a bright boy Blake, don't throw your future away for your parents ugliness.22

Moves back.23

Now go take a seat.24

BLAKE25

Nods.
Walking towards the back of the room to his normal seat.
His eyes are to the ground until he reaches his desk.
He sees a pair of Black shoes pointing from his desk.
Looks up to see a pretty girl looking up at him.26

Your in my seat.
Mutters under breath.27

HAZEL28

I beg you pardon.
Looks innocently into his eyes.
Brushes her hair behind her ear.29

BLAKE30

Shivers.
Not being able to take his eyes of hers.31

Your in my seat.
Repeats32

HAZEL

Nods.33

I heard that, but I didn't think this school had assigned seating.
Everyone just came in.
Not like my old school were we had to wait for the teacher.34

BLAKE35

Shakes his head.
Walking behind her.
He throws his bag on the table, causing a loud bang.36

(A few classmates turn around
Teacher looks towards him)37

TEACHER38

Hurry up and take a seat Mr Oxford39

HAZEL

Jumps a little in her seat.
Watches as Blake pulls up a chair and clonks himself down on it.40

BLAKE

Turns to Hazel.41

You know, why don't you go and sit with the girls?
There is plenty of vacancies for girls like you.42

Looks up, pointing to the girls in front of him.43

HAZEL44

looks at the girls, making faces at her.
Looking down and whispering, pointing towards her.45

You mean those stuck up bitches over there.
Says loudly, making sure the whole class can hear.46


BLAKE47

pulls her arms a little towards him.48

shush you can't say that.
Why would you say that?
There not bitches, they're just girls.49

HAZEL50

Brushes Blake's arm away.51

Exactly.
So why would I want to sit with them?52

BLAKE53

Looks confused by her comment.54

Huh?
I don't get it.55

HAZEL

Shakes her head.56

When your a girl you will understand?57

BLAKE

Excuse me?
Why the hell would I want to be a girl.
Who told you I wanted to be a girl?
Tell me was it one of the guys, cause I swear if it is they are so fucking dead.
Hisses under his breath58

Panics, looking around.59

Whatever you hear it is not true okay?60

HAZEL61

Looks strangely at Blake.62

Okay.
I see we have a few issues here.
No one told me anything.
I was just saying you can't truly understand the concept of bitchy girls, until you are a girl yourself.
Look at them.63

Points towards them.64


BLAKE

Still looking at the girls.65

HAZEL

They're all giving me the greasy.
Why would I want to sit with them?
That is a sure warning sign they want nothing to do with you.66

BLAKE67

Turns to look at Hazel.
Eyebrow raised.68

Greasy?69

HAZEL70

leans forward.71

Yeah greasy.
See the way she is looking at me?
The one in the red.
Looking me up and down.
With an expression like I have just done a giant shit right under her oh so precious nose.72

BLAKE73

Watches as the girl in red expression changes from annoyed to disgusted.
As she whispers and points towards Hazel.74

You sure it's not me?
Could be me.
I never had a shower this morning.75

HAZEL

looks as Blake and chuckles.76

You never had a shower this morning?77

BLAKE78

Shakes his head.79

No
Can't you tell?
Don't I smell ?80

HAZEL81

Shakes head.82

No.
Do I?83

Moves body closer.
Resting her hand on his lap.84

BLAKE85

Surprised his body freezes.
looks down to see her hand on his leg.
Gasps for air a little.86

Please stay down, please stay down, please stay down
Inner voice87

HAZEL88

Looks down to where her hand is.
Pulls away.89

Whoa...Okay...Obviously not.90

BLAKE91

Grabs a book.
Places it on his crouch 92

Shit.
Hisses
Sorry, just.
Shit.93

HAZEL

Teasingly moves closer
moves her lips towards his ear.94

You know Mr Oxford.
Some people take it as a compliment.95

Giggles
Pats knee96

TEACHER97

Points to Hazel.98

Class , Today we have a new student.
I would like you all to welcome Miss Hazel Marshall
Miss Marshall, would you like to stand up and tell us a bit about yourself?99

HAZEL

Stands up.
In front of the class.
Looks around.100

My name Is Hazel Marshall.
I come from Diamond mountain High.
I live with my Parents.
My Father is a enterpriser and my mother is a workaholic bitch.
I am an only child.
And I dig anything old.
Any thing strange and weird pretty much.
Like you sir.101

TEACHER102

Frowns.
Looking at her strangely.103

(Class erupts in whispers)104

HAZEL

looks around.
Seeing no one take that as a joke.105

That was a joke.
Says reassuringly106

Hears a class mate say.
What-ever 107

TEACHER108

okay you may take a seat Miss Marshall.
Everyone I hope you make her feel right at home here at Annabella High.109

HAZEL

Sits down.
Pats her skirt.
Looks at Blake110

BLAKE

Gives her a weird look.111

HAZEL112

what?113

BLAKE

smiles slightly.
still clutching the book tightly over his crouch.114

Your a freak.115

HAZEL

turns away lowering her head.116

Thanks.
I get that a lot.117

BLAKE118

feels strange inside.
Takes a deep breath after a few minutes of thought.119

Do you wanna join me for lunch Hazel?120

HAZEL121

looks at Blake
Searching his eyes for the truth.122

You mean it?
You sure I mean, I wouldn't want to invade you manly hood.123

BLAKE

nods.124

What manly hood.
I'm a freak just like you.
I think we are going to get along just fine.125

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  • V l
    April 12

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    You are so dam good girl your writting is master peacies . I love how you make your characters beleve and make the events in thier lives feel so real


  • Hismercy
    April 12

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    Detention slips are a bumber

    What caught my eye first was when you described about lowering your head down it reminded me of someone curled up in a feetle position to make things go away.

    One of my first laughts is when I what caught off guard, when you described those stuck up...woman.

    I love it when the reader is involved with hazel and blake..and then the teacher steps in to introduce hazel and ruins their conversation. It starts the reader over trying to concentrate on the plot and conversation, yet in a good way.

    one of my favorite parts was when blake admits to being a freak to hazel. That was brave....that was awesome.

    great story !

    -Hismercy