As predicted, she lay on her back, her bed a pallet of cold stone. Her golden hair lay like silk around her head; her slender, femininely curved body was clothed in a gown of crimson velvet. Her skin was pale and flawless, lips plump and parted slightly, as if awaiting her love’s first kiss. The kiss that would stir her from her deep slumber.1
Without hesitation, he – the Prince – approached her. She slept soundly – who would know if he violated her stone-like state? Grinning wickedly, the Prince shed his breeches and then straddled her hips, lowering his head to run his tongue along her bottom lip, careful not to touch his lips to hers. He fondled himself, and then impatiently tugged up the skirt of her gown. 2
That’s when her eyes snapped open.3
With a gasp, the Prince went to throw himself off of her. Had he kissed her by accident?4
Her hands shot up to still his movements.5
“Shh, my Prince.” She whispered hoarsely, dark grey eyes searing into his own. Her hands slid to his groin. 6
“Lady!” He cried as she tore her razor-sharp talons down his cock. An evil smirk curved her lips, but she didn’t let go of him. The Prince squirmed, and then screamed when she grabbed his erection and rammed it upward, toward his stomach. He threw himself away from her, letting out cries of pain, trying to nurse his pride. He looked at her with wide, awed eyes.7
She sat up and carefully smoothed her hair away from her face. Rising, she slid her hands down her front, smoothing down her gown. And then she looked at the Prince.8
He leaped away as she took a step toward him; stumbling to the door, uncaring that he was naked from the waist down.9
The door slammed in his face, and no matter how hard he pulled, he could not get it open again.10
Whirling, he found her still watching him. But now a knowing sneer had settled, and a shock of fear surged through him. He knew instantly that somehow she had closed the door.11
He remembered the whisperings of Dark magick that were woven around the tale of Sleeping Beauty. How she was truly a witch out to kill all men… How after each killing she absorbed his soul, and then went back to sleep until the next man was brave enough to attempt waking her.12
He had never believed the tales. What kind of a man believed in witchcraft?13
Her voice interrupted his thoughts.14
“I fear, dear Prince, that you have forgotten your breeches.” She smiled softly. The kindness of her voice surprised him, and he gaped. “I apologize for frightening you. You just surprised me, and I didn’t want you to leave… I’m so lonely…” She sighed, lowering her eyes to his baffled manhood. A giggle escaped past her lips, and then she went serious.15
Turning part way, she glanced at him with bedroom eyes, lids lowered. She pulled a corner of her gown off her shoulder, and his breath caught at the sight of flawless, milky skin. The gown slid off her other shoulder, shimmering down the length of her; past her breasts, past flat stomach, past flared hips. 16
She stepped out of the ring of crimson material and, totally naked, turned to him, teasing him with her innocence. She wandered to the stone bed and lay down, propping herself up on her elbows. She arched her back, giving him a seductive display as she thrust out her breasts. 17
“If you’re going to stand there, you may as well put that,” she looked at his crotch “to use.” When he didn’t move, she pushed out her bottom lip, taking on a pout look. “Well?” She spread her legs in invitation. 18
Tearing off his tunic, the Prince took the three steps needed and, without a pause, drove himself into her. She screeched, like a cat being mounted, and tore her talons down his back. Wrapping her legs around his waist, she threw back her head in ecstasy as he thrust greedily into her, again and again. He suckled at her neck, nipping with his teeth now and then, hearing her shrill animal cries as they brought each other to and over the peak.19
He took her again, never gentle, and a few more times after that, using force every time. She submitted to him, until the last time, when she threw him down and straddled his hips, ramming him into her with a selfish need that always seemed to hunger for more.20
He clutched at her, her hips, her breasts. Sweat and blood coated them both, making their flesh slippery.21
And then she stopped.22
He growled in irritation. “What’s wrong? Keep going!”23
She smiled, showing her teeth. Small, pointed teeth, gleaming with saliva, hungering for him as much as she did. 24
He tried to scream, but found himself orgasming instead.25
She raked her nails down his chest, pinning his wrists above his head with an invisible bond. And then she lowered her head.26
“You were wonderful, my Prince.” She crooned, muscles spasming as she, too, reached her peak. “But you fucked yourself.”27
She put her lips to his chest, and this time, he did scream. Screamed as she sucked his soul from his body. Screamed as his body died, lying still even before his mind, too, collapsed.28
Still inside the Slumbering Witch, the Prince died…29
She sat up and licked her lips, and then bent once more, teeth tearing into his throat.30
What a fine meal this Prince would make.31
A fine meal. 32
Author notes
Moral of the story - Don't fuck with females, whether they're asleep or not.
There will be more of these twisted tales... Eventually.
What did you think? Please comment!
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Thanks for the comment.
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Blessed. -
wow i agree with everyone. Keep up the work. I hope to be seeing more of your work.
Blessed Be,
Kayla Lynn -
Thanks for the comment, lol. I haven't had much luck writing more of my tales, but when I do, I'll keep ya posted.
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laughs omg... oh my friggin god... that's so incredibly awesome.
I love the moral of the story. Totally true and totally awesome.... for some reason she reminded me of a vampire which is completely awesome. Keep writing... and tell me when you write more of these kinds of stories!!!
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lol. Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. It's always a pleasure to have my work shown to others...
Thanks again for the comment.
Blessed. -
i love this- i love it so much. i am going to share it with everyone i know- which doesn't amount to that many people, but at least a few will never be able to think of sleeping beauty the same way again- this is exquisite.
blessed be -
lol. Thanks for the comment - and the pun
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wow. this rocked! ive never heard that version of sleeping beauty before...but it was truly amazing. i loved the imagery. naughty prince. got what was coming to him. coming...ah ha. no pun intended.
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Thanks for the comment. To tell you the truth, if I were a guy, I wouldn't have trusted her the second time either. But I had to have some way to continue on with the story... Thanks again.
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Thanks, Miguel. *embarrassed as fuck*
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Hot story very imaginative... I personally would not have trusted her the second time, but then, I may just be an untrusting sort. But then, I'm still alive.
Cool erotic twist to fable..
Bennett -
WOA! I finally read it! SCORE! This was awesome, made Tulio and in imagined pain at one part, but thats what ya get for violation! DEATH HAHAHAH. Fricken awesome though.
-Miguel -
Thanks for the comment. To tell you the truth, I thought people would hate this... So far, I've received no negative comments. Bonus! Thanks again.
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whoa.. very twisted. i like it very original too. you depicted this nicely. good job ^^
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lol, thanks, DarkAngel... I was attempting to make it as original as possible...
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Thank you for the comment, huneebunee. I didn't want anything good to happen to the Prince dude, but hey... It happens.
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Thanks for the comment. As soon as I get more of my 'twisted tales' written, I'll post them ASAP. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you for the comment, Itsalie
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Thanks for your comment. I've heard a bit about how, in the old "adult" Sleeping Beauty, she wakes up not by being kissed by her prince, but by giving birth to twins... And I just thought, well.... Why let guys have all the fun? Thanks again.
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sweet jesus......never looked at the story from THAT angle. my word, how cool!
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Sounds like the perfect way for a guy to die. Great write!
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I really liked this. It was such a twist on the real story. I didn't think she'd do that in the end, but HEY. At least she got some pleasure out of it. Heh. And at least he died at orgasm! That's more than most people could ask for
. Just messin'. But anyhow. I'd like to read more of these twisted tales, as you called them. This caught my eye and I read til the end..And yes..Don't fuck with us. We'll bring you down for sure.
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very good
Not quite what I was expecting but considering his initial intentions I don't have a problem with the outcome. Another win for the other side.
Talia
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*claps* Awesome, totally awesome. I especially love the "moral" of it ... I love fairy tales, and I love it even more when people write their own dark/humorous/perverted takes on them, and I really love what you did with Sleeping Beauty, which I guess is really a good thing to do with that story, since a lot of the original story connotates date rape and such. Glad to see what you make her do with the Prince that comes to "rescue" her. Awesome write!
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