I opened my eyes to another morning, as I lay in my bed I
look over to the other side of this room and there was Mike Dirnt
sleeping like a log, as I come to realization that Im not
dreaming, and that Im still Tre Cool sharing the room with
my younger roomates.1
As I stretch my legs and arms out, my memory starts
recollecting that I'm in a foster home with different people with
different personalities.2
The alarm clock rings loudly like every morning, and at that
instant I look over and Billie Joe ( My third and final roomate)
walks thrue the bedroom door, like every morning with a bed tray
and a plate full of food and orange juice. ( I see someone got up
earlier than I did and decided to be nice today)
I get my food and joyfully eat my plate clean, as I do this I
see my other roomate wakeing up as well due to the smell.
( NOT the annoying alarm noise. )3
As Im drinking my O.J. I can hear my older fellow orphan
companion friends Jimmie, Rori and Dustin being cranky and not
wanting to get out of bed on this Monday morning.
One thing about living in a orphan home is, there is more
than one bathroom to bathe and get ready in. 4
Mornings are stressful and very busy as the bathroom water is
constantly going, and shouting is going about with the older and
younger sibblings.5
The morning proceeds as we grab our school bags and lunches
that are waiting for us at the front door where we place them
before bed time.6
As im dressed and ready for the day I and the rest of the
gang can hear the school bus ready to take us all away to the fun
and torterous day.7
The END
A contest entry
- YOU Make the Story!!! by RockerGirl123.
100 points, ended April 19, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Amazing
The story really caught my attention. No wonder you won an award. I guess we'll just have to thank god for anything I win lol anyways you're an amazing writer.
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That was indeed an interesting read, quite captivating, though needs little bit of polishing, like checking for spelling mistakes. It would make the story more presentable.
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Very interesting piece you have here
I can't say that I know much at all about Green Day, but I did enjoy reading your story. ~Joann
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That was an interesting way to portray the Green Day members (and the other characters as well). It's hard for me to even imagine them as kids. I have an older friend who claimed to have gone to school with Billie Joe in California, though I don't think I believe him. Anyway, the write was entertaining, my head is still spinning trying to picture them that young. Loved the part where Mike only woke up because he smelled food, reminds me of someone.
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yay!
i liked this a lot, actually! i dunno why i just did. it caught my attention.
haha but wat me and my friends joke - billie wouldnt be that nice, as we say!
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Interesting... It seems still keeping with the simplicity yet packs a punch of thoughts and provocative emotion when I read it.. the characters slowly, churning, magical in some way..slowly seeping into my mind, into my world..and we grasp them with both hands...
I love the ending
reminds me of me
torturous day.
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