The Hitchhiker (chapter 4)

Store Clerk: "Are you sure miss?"1

Me: "Yes, I'm sure."2

Store Clerk: "Would that be all?"3

Me: "Yes, I should be on my way now, thanks."4

Store Clerk: "Not a problem and you're welcome."5

I payed the clerk for6

the chocolate bars and rushed 7

out the door.8

I jumped in the car9

and sped off.10

Gas Attendant: "I wonder what11

her problem was?"12

Store Clerk: "Something must have13

scared her off."14

Gas Attendant: "Maybe it was that guy15

that came in earlier."16

Store Clerk: "It might have been."17

Gas Attendant: "I've never seen him18

around here before."19

Store Clerk: "Me neither."20

The rain had calmed 21

down a bit.22

I was on the highway23

for about ten minutes,24

when I saw a dark figure25

walking on the side26

of the road.27

The dark figure turned around28

and stuck his thumb out.29

Author notes

I'm still working on the next chapter.

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  • xXRawerxX
    March 12, 2005
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    that is creepy and I love it I can't wait to read the rest...ZODC

  • Shinigami
    July 20, 2003
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    hey Cyn loving it so far

    Ness