Store Clerk: "Are you sure miss?"1
Me: "Yes, I'm sure."2
Store Clerk: "Would that be all?"3
Me: "Yes, I should be on my way now, thanks."4
Store Clerk: "Not a problem and you're welcome."5
I payed the clerk for6
the chocolate bars and rushed 7
out the door.8
I jumped in the car9
and sped off.10
Gas Attendant: "I wonder what11
her problem was?"12
Store Clerk: "Something must have13
scared her off."14
Gas Attendant: "Maybe it was that guy15
that came in earlier."16
Store Clerk: "It might have been."17
Gas Attendant: "I've never seen him18
around here before."19
Store Clerk: "Me neither."20
The rain had calmed 21
down a bit.22
I was on the highway23
for about ten minutes,24
when I saw a dark figure25
walking on the side26
of the road.27
The dark figure turned around28
and stuck his thumb out.29
Author notes
I'm still working on the next chapter.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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that is creepy and I love it I can't wait to read the rest...ZODC
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hey Cyn
loving it so far
Ness

