I stand here, day by day, wiping the sweat from my brow, trying not to taint the mix. Gah, the steam in my eyes yet again, these modern meat forges aren’t what they use to be, but then they get the job done, and with me you get perfection every time. I've always wondered, you know...what happens when I send them out into the world? What becomes of my divine creations... 1
Best not to contemplate, best not to speculate, if i don't keep an eye on these they will become impure, and him over there, Damian they calls him, tends to send a lot of impure ones out there and what becomes of them? What do they do upon interacting with others? People suffer you know, horrible horrible things.2
Well, this batch is done and thus i must let them go. "ORDER UP" oh yes, the joys of being a chef, creator of cuisine.
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Love it!
I'm quite new to this, and reading your story..WOW! I guess less is more in this case, I like to read bits like this as it sort of keeps you guessing, and then the end..omg I really don't know what to say. Amazin
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Wow, nice imagery, I love how you wrapped it up at the end and explained what the description was of. Very good little twist at the end. Great job!
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AWESOME!!!! Keep writing like this and you will go far. Great job Phil. Keep penning and let me know when the next story is up.
Ice
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Hi. I see you are impressive on many levels. I like this. Fresh and well spoken. I also must tell you i adore your author pic up here Nice job! I did note one small error in the second paragraph, second line: should be "call" instead of "calls".
Much love,
Mel
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Excellent!
I absolutely loved the twist, as it was extremely unexpected, which i assume was your intent to begin with.
It's lovely to see you attempt snippets of stories/dialogue as a change from poetry. You do very well in both fields, and i urge you to continue.
An enjoyable read, well done.
Yrs.
Azaradelle.
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Ah! Nice twist. The joys of being a chef, ha. I had to re-read it to see how each thing you said applied to being a chef. Well done.
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