Part 11 1
The truck comes to a halt and Ryan steps out 2
Rachel! Rachel! RACHELLLL! He shouts 3
He begins to cry 4
He starts to pray, oh God why 5
Bumping around in the back of the truck6
Rachel starts to feel a bit sick 7
Stop the truck please let me out she screams 8
I need to throw up… please stop the truck quick 9
The large man stops the truck and walks to the back 10
He unlocks both sides of the box and lifts the lid open 11
Shut the hell up little one before I have to shut you up 12
About that time the other man begins his attack 13
He took the shovel and hit the large man in the back of the head 14
He staggered a bit back and forth 15
Blood now rushing from the open wound 16
Now you have done it… you both are as good as dead 17
The smaller man helped Rachel out of the box 18
Quickly helping her to untie her hands and feet 19
The large man stumbled toward them 20
Both now in a panic… Rachel screams at the sound of a shot 21
She looks at the face of her rescuer blood now covers his chest 22
Looking back now at his murderer fear grows wildly inside of her 23
She begins to scream… 24
Another shot is fired; everything now is just a blur 25
Joe, Joe, Joe… did I not warn you to stay out of my way 26
Now look what you have made me do 27
Both breathing erratically he drags the bodies into the wooded area 28
Why couldn’t you just do what I say 29
Making sure that his tracks were covered well 30
He covered the blooded areas with dirt31
Then again with a layer of scattered leaves 32
Now it is time to finish this job as he changes his shirt 33
Darkness falls quickly Ryan sits on the tailgate of his truck 34
He calls Sarah, I have been everywhere; I do not know where else to go 35
Have you heard anything from the police 36
What do you mean they are calling the search to a cease 37
Ryan they assured me that they would continue to keep a look out for her 38
you know that they cannot keep the whole force out looking for her 39
They pulled the man sitting outside the house out on another call 40
Of course I am ok Ryan, yes dear I am completely sure41
Forgive me Lord for what I have done42
Gasping for each and every breath43
I loved him so much that I could not let go 44
Even at the cost of my own Mothers death 45
She coughs up blood… it flows from the corner of her mouth 46
Drunken with the stench of death 47
She looks over to this man named Joe 48
Then she remembers… Sarah’s party… Oh No 49
He was in Ryan and Sarah’s room on the phone 50
Was he after Sarah what was he to her 51
Fear filled her last gasping breaths 52
Until she breathed her last53
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Comments
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so is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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was not what i expected... AT ALL!
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yay, though I was expecting a little torture first I wasn't expecting her to die so soon. dang, now comes the long wait 'till the next installment. I'll have to find something to keep me occupied 'till then .;o)
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omg! No! Damn good job. I want more! Lmao great job I love this one..it left me hangin'
great job.


