Body Language Part 11

Part 11 1

The truck comes to a halt and Ryan steps out 2

Rachel! Rachel! RACHELLLL! He shouts 3

He begins to cry 4

He starts to pray, oh God why 5

Bumping around in the back of the truck6

Rachel starts to feel a bit sick 7

Stop the truck please let me out she screams 8

I need to throw up…  please stop the truck quick 9

The large man stops the truck and walks to the back 10

He unlocks both sides of the box and lifts the lid open 11

Shut the hell up little one before I have to shut you up 12

About that time the other man begins his attack 13

He took the shovel and hit the large man in the back of the head 14

He staggered a bit back and forth 15

Blood now rushing from the open wound 16

Now you have done it… you both are as good as dead 17

The smaller man helped Rachel out of the box 18

Quickly helping her to untie her hands and feet 19

The large man stumbled toward them 20

Both now in a panic… Rachel screams at the sound of a shot 21

She looks at the face of her rescuer blood now covers his chest 22

Looking back now at his murderer fear grows wildly inside of her 23

She begins to scream… 24

Another shot is fired; everything now is just a blur 25

Joe, Joe, Joe… did I not warn you to stay out of my way 26

Now look what you have made me do 27

Both breathing erratically he drags the bodies into the wooded area 28

Why couldn’t you just do what I say 29

Making sure that his tracks were covered well 30

He covered the blooded areas with dirt31

Then again with a layer of scattered leaves 32

Now it is time to finish this job as he changes his shirt 33

Darkness falls quickly Ryan sits on the tailgate of his truck 34

He calls Sarah, I have been everywhere; I do not know where else to go 35

Have you heard anything from the police 36

What do you mean they are calling the search to a cease 37

Ryan they assured me that they would continue to keep a look out for her 38

you know that they cannot keep the whole force out looking for her 39

They pulled the man sitting outside the house out on another call 40

Of course I am ok Ryan, yes dear I am completely sure41

Forgive me Lord for what I have done42

Gasping for each and every breath43

I loved him so much that I could not let go 44

Even at the cost of my own Mothers death 45

She coughs up blood… it flows from the corner of her mouth 46

Drunken with the stench of death 47

She looks over to this man named Joe 48

Then she remembers… Sarah’s party… Oh No 49

He was in Ryan and Sarah’s room on the phone 50

Was he after Sarah what was he to her 51

Fear filled her last gasping breaths 52

Until she breathed her last53

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  • Kukana
    December 29, 2004
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    so is that a good thing or a bad thing?

  • glitter
    December 29, 2004
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    was not what i expected... AT ALL!


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    December 29, 2004
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    yay, though I was expecting a little torture first I wasn't expecting her to die so soon. dang, now comes the long wait 'till the next installment. I'll have to find something to keep me occupied 'till then .;o)


  • SmokeFollowsBeauty
    December 29, 2004
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    omg! No! Damn good job. I want more! Lmao great job I love this one..it left me hangin' great job.