Came home from work anxious to see Betty.1
Opened the door and she was wearing2
a black laced peek a boo teddy.3
Her breast were exposed and her nipples4
were erect.5
She smiled then spread her legs and invited me 6
to have sex.7
My eye's popped outside my head.8
As visions of sexual fantasies made my blood red.9
She was sexy and tempting as a Porter House Steak.10
Her titties were so voluptuous they made me shake.11
She smelled sweet as Florence nightingale.12
All I could think about is ringing her bell.13
I quickly undressed and took a shower.14
As I entered the bedroom there she was laying on15
the bed hot with desire.16
I proceeded to her side all dripping wet.17
She purred in my ear,"is buddy hard yet?"18
At the touch of her hand buddy began to rise.19
Her face was a glow as she witnessed the big surprise.20
Taking buddy in her hand she gently caressed him 21
with her lips.22
Then out slid her tongue as she licked and dipped.23
Buddy pulsated and throbbed in her mouth.24
I decided to joined the party and went down south.25
The room resonated with erotic melodies.26
As we smacked slurped and slopped into ecstasy.27
I lapped her succulent clit as she sucked buddy red.28
I especially enjoyed the skillfulness she applied 29
while licking my head.30
After plenty of dinning at cafe sixty nine 31
she was wet and juicy and ready to be glazed.32
I slid buddy deep inside her and our bodies were ablaze.33
Heat to heat in flames of passion 34
to the motion of the ocean our bodies 35
screamed for more action.36
With oscillating asses and grinding pelvis,37
We rocked and rolled like old Elvis!38
The house began to shake rattle and roll.39
As our bodies shivered with delight 40
as we lost control.41
Deep into the night our juices flowed.42
Flesh to flesh united body mind and soul.43
In the rapture of this twilight we did soar.44
Releasing streams of cream in the fields of joy. 45
What did you think? Please comment!
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Your stories are truly amazing. Where on earth did you get such a wonderful mind for stories like these
Absolutely wonderful write. Very well done
PassionFlower
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Ok, thanks for waiting.
Sigh Wonderful write. And now that my head
is cleared and I can think a little better,
DANG!!! Amazing and HOT!
Lily ~* -
whoa....I really enjoyed this...it had me laughing too...I love the line
After plenty of dinning at cafe sixty nine
LMAO...that is amazing....great write!
XoXo
NiKKi
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MY MY MY! What HOT write, i enjoyed it, and betty seems to be a very lucky girl! Great work
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Lol. I like this. I think my favorite line is...
"In the rapture of this twilight we did soar.
Releasing streams of cream in the fields of joy. "
Mmmm. I wanna try this. It sounds hot. You did a great job of coming up with it. Yummy yummy, what a lucky pair. -
A very nice fantasy and I bet Betty is Hot-N-Ready! Good luck in the contest and may it also be with you in the New Year ahead.
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Ted E.
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very good
Nicely written. Best in the contest so far (but I'm not judging).
Talia
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So sexually exciting!
So HOT HOT HOT!. Betty's a very lucky babe with her delicious Porter House steak self. You sir, are the master of fantasies. Your poem is dripping with sensual creamy juices, it's totally buddylisciously pleasing and tempting. With "oscillating asses and grinding pelvis", who could ask for anthing more. I really enjoyed your fantasy and hopefully soon we can make it all come true. What do you say big boy? Avril
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Wow darell, this is some fantasy, great poem my friend~Love~Joan
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