"Here we are, the Palace Gardens!" one of our head chaperons said. We all cheered. After being on the road for six straight hours, we were all sick of being in cars.1
"Now, before we start, we're going to be putting you in groups of 6. Consider it a lucky chance that there are 54 of you," the chaperon said. I won't tell you what he said, since it took forever. I'll tell you my group, though. It consisted of me, my two best gal friends, my crush, and his two best guy friends.2
...Coincidence? We're still trying to figure that out.
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Coincidence!
lol i wonder what shall happen next... or what the plat even is... but good intro! -
I like it. It's a nice start. I look forward to seeing where it goes. These kinds of stories are fun to write, but in my own experience, they can be good but never great. At least when I write then. I'll eat my words later. (= Pieces like the one you wrote of the girl behind the ocean are great. Anyway, continue this! Soon. (=
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being strong
To be forced in a group, especially among other people in the group who are your best friends and even those hard to get along with is a great challenge !
-Hismercy
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