Staring at you is like staring into the sun,1
I shouldn't but I can't help myself sometimes. 2
I watch youias your hands relate words onto your page. 3
I see your lips moving, in a silent conversation to yourself. Somehow you always find me gazing your way and in an instant,4
my eyes avert themselves. 5
But I know that only makes it obvious. 6
And yet the cycle continues,7
this awkward staring game of ours.
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written Jan. 23, 2008
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awkward
I see a few places that need comma's and even spelling errors, yet take those away and this a great awkward game (in a strange way)
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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