cemetery gates(chapter four)

Alex stepped into the warehouse, his bike still running out side. With his third step, he had begun to open fire on any he saw, and there were many. He systematicaly walked through the building, killing anything he saw with the uzi. He got to the back wall,and dropped the uzi,both clips empty. He pulled forward the M14,and kicked through the thin sheet metal wall.1

As he stepped into the yard behind the warehouse, Alex opened fire onto a group of workers. As they fell, he opened up on men running towards him. Anything that moved took his wrath, and soon there was not but dead bodies strewn about. he dropped the m14,and pulled from the bag a grenade launcher, firing off rounds into the complex,destroying all. He walked back through the ware house to his bike,firing off a few more rounds to destroy anything that may be wounded. 2

He got on his bike, to see a man in a long black coat in front of him. The wind blew at the mans coat and long black hair, but his face was not visable. A grin was flashed at alex, then he disappeared in to the night. Alex looked for a second longer, then kicked off towards home3

im dedicating this chapter to my dear friend vincent,who was recently killed in iraq

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  • well u havent written in 4ever babe i wanted to read some more, it's really good.
    you are so fuckn' beautiful & no matter how retarded u may act sometimes the stuff that you write is so deep & amazing. ~i love you~ <333