Straight to Video - Scene 2 - PRT 2

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Int.Coffeshop.Night
Alexis and Nancy are finishing their cleaning duties for the night. Alexis has been silent for most of the remainder of her shift. Nancy knowing her to well, left her to be. Now that everyone has gone home except the two of them, Nancy takes it in her stride to ask her how it really went. Alexis tells her about how Blake was willing to just throw his virginity away for someone who was using him, and her fear that Blake doesn't accept her or is embarrassed by her. Nancy tries to comfort her, and Alexis accept that she made a mistake, and maybe Blake might have no accepted her all along.2

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ALEXIS
Washing the dishes.
every few minutes she wipes her eyes.
Is crying.4


NANCY5

Is sweeping the floor.
Listening to Alexis sniff, every few minutes.
Concerned look on her face.
Stops sweeping, leans against the broom.
Takes a few small breaths.
Pondering whether to ask Alexis how it went.
Takes a deep breath in, realizing she has to do ask.6


So how did lunch go then?
Did you find out if the Blake Master scored himself a Girlfriend?
Nervously asks, in a joking tone7

ALEXIS8

Continues to clean.
Rubbing the scrubber harder, sending water splashing everywhere.9


Yep, everything was just terrific.10

NANCY11

Puts broom back in the corner.
Walks over to Alexis, standing behind her.
Places her hand careful on her shoulder.12

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If everything went well, then why are you trashing the hell out of those poor dishes.
Come on Alexis you have been quiet ever since you came back.
And excuse me to sound invading, but honey that just is not you at all.
So come on and tell me what happened.14

ALEXIS15

Throws the scrubber into the sink.
Lets out a loud whimper.
Turning around, she faces Nancy, tears streaming down her face.16


I don't know what went wrong.
I mean he was there and she was there.
Then he was all like fuck off mum
Then  he said he was going to go and have sex with her.
Then he just left.
And I know she was using him, I just know it.
Rambles in a fast speaking tone17


NANCY18

Rubs her shoulder.
watches as more tears fall down her face.19


Slowdown honey and start from the beginning.20

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ALEXIS22

Wipes her eyes and nose on her sleeve.23


I just walked over.
Asked a few questions.
Then when I asked him to move over.
He told her I was just leaving.
Then she got all uptight and left.
Then he told me that he... he was going to..going to have sex with her.24


Coughs.25


Then when I tried to explain that she was only using him, well he shut me of.
Told me he wants to be used.
That he was willing to have sex with her regardless that it was a one night stand.
And that...26


Sniffs loudly, coughing to clear her throat.27

NANCY28

Mover he hand to her cheek
Wipes away the tears.29


Go on honey.
I'm all ears.30

ALEXIS31

She said that I should just let her go.32


NANCY33

confused expression.
Continues to wipe the tears with her fingertips as they roll down her cheeks.34


Let who go?
The Woman he was with?35

ALEXIS36

Shakes head
Moving a little to wipe her nose with the wet gloves.37


No not her.
He told me I should just let Penny Go.
Move on.
That he was not like her.
And all I could think of when he was saying those things, was that he was acting completely like she would.
Acting on impulse without even a thought of the heartache or consequences.
It made me sick.38


Moves hand to her stomach.39


It made me sick right to the core.
I don't want to loose him to that.
I don't want to loose my boy.40

NANCY41

Pulls her close.
Embraces her in a tight hug.
Stroking her hair.42


Oh honey you won't loose him.
Blake is a sensible boy. He is a good boy.
He has you to thank for that.
He was mostly only acting on confusion more than anything.
I mean come on and think about it.
He hasn't been around that many women if his life.
So of course he is going to feel really excited when a woman pays attention to him.
I mean especially if that attention was sexual attention.
God knows what teenage boys are like when a sexy woman test there buttons.43

ALEXIS44

Nods.
Rests her head on Nancy's shoulder
Cries hard into her shoulder
Stops... Breaths
Then slowly pulls back.45

I just don't understand why?
Why would he want to subject himself to that.
Especially when he knows exactly what Penny is like.
I can't of been to good of a mother if he is willing to go and pull a stunt like that.
That's the kind of thing you would expect him to do if he was living with her, not me.46

NANCY47

Shakes her head.
Stepping back.48

Now come on Honey that is just not true.
You have shown him life the best way you could.
I mean think about it.
He is a good student, stays out of trouble, is always well mannered.
He is smart, good looking, funny.
He is everything I wish for with my own children.
But teenagers get to that stage in their lives that they want to rebel.
Rebel against anything and everything that might detest parental wants and needs.
I mean I have been through it, and so have you.49

ALEXIS50

I know.
I know I have been there.
God how I know.51

NANCY52

See what I mean.
You were once a frisky, rebellious, sexually confused teenager yourself once.
Were you not?53

ALEXIS54

Nods.55


Yes your right.
I was.
Wanted every girl I could have.
Yet at the same time I knew I was one.56


NANCY57

See now.
What I am trying to say is, that was what it was most likely about.
He wanted the thrill, the excitement.
He had the chance, and his pants had it set that was what he was going to do.
In the back of his mind he was probably just more so frightened, than embarrassed.
And trust me, it was not about you.
It was the fact that you walked in, and interrupted him at an awkward moment.
And by the sounds of it, you did a good thing by doing that.
Even if you feel regretful.
Blake would have been making a big mistake.
Although in saying that,
As the saying goes, you learn from your mistakes.
Ans you must not feel as though you have to in a way shield him from a certain sexual life style.58

ALEXIS59

Takes of gloves.
Wiping the last of her tears.60


What if I can't?
I don't think I could live with myself knowing he was hurt.
All because I did not try and prevent it from happening61

NANCY62

Calmly laughs
Taking the gloves from her.
Throws them in a nearby trash can63


You can;t prevent something that in inevitable.
Sex is part of life.
Whether it be solo, homosexual, straight.
Whatever the preference or circumstance sex is life.
And sooner or later, sooner for him I can see
He is going to want to have sex.
And sorry honey but really there is nothing you can really do to stop him from doing it.
Just be there for him.
Be there for him regardless, and don't ever say I told you so.
because no ones perfect.
He already knows you care.
Just show him that you care more than he already knows.64

ALEXIS65

Smiles.
Runs her hand through her hair.66


Oh what would I do without you.
says softly.67

NANCY68

Grins69


I can think of a lot of things you would do without me.70


Laughs.
Pulls Alexis in for another hug.71


Do you see what I am talking about though honey?
Blake was testing his curiosity today.
He was afraid, and upset that you invaded his situation.
So he is going to be pretty upset for the next few days.
but he will get over it, and will move on.
Then everything will be okay.
Just stay strong.
Know for a fact that you are the best mother for him, and the best mother I know.
Keep your chin up.
Blake has a lot more respect for you than you think he does.72

ALEXIS73

Hugs tightly
Her smile growing to a soft frown.
Pulling away she looks her watch.
Noticing it is past nine o'clock.74


What you say we get out of this place?
Call it a night?
I got to be getting home to my son.
Fingers cross he's at home.75

NANCY76

I say that's a darn good idea.77


Takes of apron.
Walks over to rack, and hangs apron.78


Turns to face Alexis.79


He will be fine.
Just remember.
Show him you love him no matter what mistakes he makes.
He will come around
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  • Rosemary silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    Emotional Mother

    I thought the mother was a little too emotional about her son getting laid. After all boys just want to have fun too. I think she would talk to him about having unprotected sex and be careful not to get any diseases. If you wanted the mother to appear as too emotional and clinging then you suceeded.


  • Missi
    April 7, 2008

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    i enjoyed this script to it was quite sad and emtional but all in order
    i like the character nancy i wonder how she will turn out to be in the end
    cant wait for the next one

    well done blair


  • Hismercy
    April 7, 2008

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    Can I hug your brain ?

    Without being like a broken record that just skips and says the same last line over and over again....

    You rock!!
    I just love it !!!


    -Hismercy

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • V l
    April 6, 2008
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    Hot as guy love his eyes and loved loved loved did I say I loved this story.