Writing is the art of words

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As I sit at the diner, my date for the night has not shown up 2

yet, "I knew I should have picked them up instead of meeting them 3

here."

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  • I keep coming back to this, and every time I don't get it. And I feel the need to read it again. And again...and again still. I think that's kind of neat.

    --Aden

  • Lacking

    I didn't get much out of this, but maybe if you added you could make a good story off of this...


  • Intrepid
    April 7

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    oH JESUS..I was expecting a lonestar at a table, but that..I only know that feeling to well and you have proved an provokative point and feeling among society in regards to romance, and love...

    I commend you.. such power inside these small words a picture does speak 1000 words, but u made it much easier than that.

    Blair
    Prais~

  • woah i imgaged it like after saw pic that it would be like that.

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