Endless Destruction Pt. 2

[This is a continuation so I'd advise reading part one first if1

you haven't already http://storywrite.com/Story/959435 ]2

November 12, 5390. 4:00 P.M.3

' This is Captain Julia Greystar, dead but alive. Death really wasn't that much of a big deal, in fact it was absolutely boring. I now live on Zergtron, time dimension #40599. The one I just died in was time dimension #666. Zergtron is like Earth, although it hasn't suffered of an apocalypse just yet.I guess our Earth really was a Hell. Everything that we had on that planet is right here, it's not even like a new beginning but a continuation. Although it is the same I miss Earth, the one that still had a chance. The one that "exists" here is basically no bigger than a boulder. Well that of course was an exaggeration. I have found my old crew and even my ship, the Revelation. We plan to fight time and death and somehow go back into the past when Earth still had a chance. I remember there were those pesky Dan8's destroying all the oxygen. There is a lot of work ahead of us and I am about to go into the King of Zergtron's palace and beg for a budget to save the planet Earth! '4

Julia put away her captain's log and drove up to the immense palace in her hovercar. She gazed at the golden gates as they opened for her entry. She parked her hovercar inside of the parking lot and walked up to the equally large main door. As if the King predicted she was going to visit, the doors opened and creaked loudly. She peered inside and noticed there were only clouds in the room, no floor, no walls and no ceiling! She walked forward and a small alien blocked any further steps she would try to make.5

"What are you here for human?", said the curiously small alien.6

"I wish to talk to King Zergtron, is he in today?", asked Julia.7

The alien raised his eyebrow and failed to stifle a giggle.8

"King Zergtron is always here, and if you paid any attention to the news you would know that! You're not much of a captain now are you, Greystar?"9

Julia stared in disbelief and just before she could say anything, the alien tapped the "floor" three times. An expensive-looking desk appeared as did a powerful alien. Julia bowed in respect.10

"King Zergtron, I suppose you already know why I came here."11

The king nodded and said,12

"Oh dear Julia, I know your intentions are great but you are not the first to ask of me for such a budget. If I give you that much Zergtrars, the whole planet will be asking me for the same thing. Not even I can afford to hand out that much money. I'm afraid planet Earth will just have to endure its fate, which is to be destroyed. Time is a delicate thing, Julia and if you save Earth it just may be the end of this planet. You must accept that the Earth is supposed to be destroyed and nothing can save it."13

Julia thought for a moment and replied,14

"But King Zergtron,  there is a way to save the Earth and I know it!15

I just really need that money to build the required technology! This planet doesn't depend on the Earth's existance does it? Although a lot of things will be changed, this planet will in fact exist!"16

The king frowned and after a long pause he replied,17

"*Sigh* I knew someday you will ask of me for this budget but I18

have always hoped you'd end it there. Now that you've realized the truth19

about this planet, I'm afraid I'll have to lock you up. You see, the Earth was seen as a mere eyesore to my great ancestors long ago. We have20

seen ourselves what the Earth is like when it survives, and it only continues to be an eyesore. New lifeforms appear and threaten the planet and it came out of our budget to save it. This planet is the home of the UPP (Universal Peace Protection) but even we have our limits. I'm sorry21

Julia, but this will be your last day in Zergtron. I will have to send22

you back to time dimension #666 in exile, to die with the rest of the planet. Once you die you will not be sent here but to time dimension #666666,and I know you know what that is."23

Julia gasped in horror and tried to run out of the kingdom but failed. Five threatening guards grabbed hold of her and strapped her into a purring machine. King Zergtron pushed a few buttons and left the room. Julia sat there and eventually fell asleep. When she woke up, she found herself sitting under a dying tree. She looked down to see the familiar purple and blue ground. A young woman walked out from what appeared to be a cave and called for the rest of her family. They all stared at her and her weird clothes. Julia noticed they all wore loin cloths and animal furs. Julia felt drained and she didn't know why, as soon as she recalled the Dan8's she fainted.24

Julia woke up to tortured screams and calls from deformed beasts and25

monstrosities.26

"Where the hell am I?!", screamed Julia.27

The screaming stopped for a moment as the ground around her shifted28

and fell into a lava-filled chasm. A large shadow rose in front of her29

and met her face sending shivers down her spine.30

"My dear, you are in Hell! Welcome to dimension #666666!", said the31

shadow.32

Julia realized she had died on Earth along with the rest of the33

planet. All hope is lost, for this dimension has no room for hope. For34

years now Julia has been tortured and enslaved by the many demons in this35

dimension. Five years later, she could've sworn she heard the laugh of36

the evil king of Zergtron. Could it be this is really the end? Is there37

hope? It didn't take long for her to realize this dementia has gotten to38

her head and carved false hope into her mind.39

This is the end.40

Author notes

Not your typical happy story with the ending being the hero
getting what he/she sought after..I like it when things end
with a twist!

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  • Halloween
    December 25, 2004
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    Nice it was a little confusing at part one but i liked it a lot! keep writing!!