She Wants Revenge. Scene 1, prt 1.

She wants revenge1

Lounge room setting. Parent's away for the night, home alone together. Bree and Brady in a small room together, dark with flickering light from the television screen. Slowly they edge closer to each other, hands touching, lips meeting.2

Bree calls Brady over to her house.
Brady comes over.
They rent out movies.3

The movie night part 14

Bree5

Sitting on her bed Bree listens to parents move around the house, packing their clothing and bits and pieces for weekend trip. Bree talks to Brady on the phone, asks him over for the night.6

BREE7

'So will you come over all what?' Bree asks Brady.8

brady9

'Sure okay, whatever. What do you want to do?' Little interest in his voice.10

Bree11

'Oh I don't know, rent some movies, eat popcorn, use our imaginations.' Bree giggles.12

Bree sits on bed, fiddling with cord, shifts her heated body a little. Stares at the door, footsteps coming up the stairs. Says a quick book goodbye and hangs the phone up.13

Bedroom door opens. Mother and Father walk into the bedroom, flustered Bree greets them with a wide, sad smile.14

Mother15

'Sorry we are going away like this darling, but business calls and your father and I really need to be at this seminar.' Smiles apologetically.16

BREE17

'It's okay, just make some money and have fun.' Bree smiles brightly, not bothered by them leaving.18

Father19

'Okay we will darling, now you be safe, and careful.' Leans in, kisses her forehead and cheek, hugs her tight. 'Buh-bye.' Leaves20

MOTHER21

'What your father said, you can have friends over but make sure no one who will cause trouble.' Kisses Bree same place as father hugs her, waves then leaves.22

BREE23

Watches them from the window, waves to make a show of missing them, moves back into house, picks up phone and redials Brady.24

BRADY25

'Hello?26

BREE27

'Hey sexy, so they are gone. Wanna come over now or what, I'm so lonely all on my own.'Puts seduction in voice, more then movies and company on mind.28

BRADY29

'Yeah okay, on my way now, bye.'30

BREE31

Hangs up phone, moves to wardrobe and picks out small clothes, boob tube and mini skirt. Moves downstairs to kitchen.32

Goes through cupboard, gets out popcorn, cooks it and places in bowl. Turns off all the lights in house, places blanket in lounge room. Sits down and waits for the doorbell to chime.33

BRADY34

Gets dressed in loose track pants, stops by shops on the way to buy condoms. Has more then movies on mind also, picks up DVD's and some chips for a snack.Stopping in a window fixes hair, spikes it more and goes to Bree's house.35

Stops at door, rings bell. Breathes in deeply, waits for the door to be opened. Thinks tonight will be fun.36

Bree37

Runs for the door, answers. Smiles and pulls Brady in, looks around to make sure nobody see's them, slams door shut. Smiles shyly.38

BREE39

'Hey, um did you get some DVD's?'40

BRADY41

'Yeah here they are.'42

Hands Bree the bag with chips and DVD's. Tucks condoms into his back pocket. Smiling he follows Bree into the lounge room where the lights off and only the blue screen illuminates anything.

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  • angel.of.mine
    April 8, 2008

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    chaaa haha awsum.. nice scriptt .. hmm ... gettin very sexuall there huh lol write more cant wait to readd xxxxxxx


  • YoursTruly-
    April 4, 2008
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    hmmm

    I like this....Please keep going...I want to find out what happens...hehe....


  • Hismercy
    April 4, 2008

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    Expensive movies night

    Great story !!!

    The only question I had in my mind from the beginning was "What movies were rented" Yet if you did put the description of what was rented, then my mind would question on something else.

    Great story, and i have to agree......

    WRITE MORE !!

    -Hismercy

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Prodigious.Mirth gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    PRETTY DARN AWESOME..

    usually it would be in the middle; but because you don't have the feature it is fine how it is...

    OH SEX... SEX O.O will their be sex.. I have no idea how to write it into a script.. but I love your characters...

    And I love the band

    I love your characters and where this heading... if u could muster out 100 pages in the next 25 days u could enter script frenzy too

    WRITE MORE

    Love awlays Blair <3