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Blake Is in a crowded coffee shop. There is not many tables. He sees a vacancy with a woman. A shapely woman, with firm breast and a conservative dress sense. He walks over to her, standing a little bit to the side and asks if he can share a table, Forgetting that his she male mother/father Alexis has just knocked of from work. He settles in to the seat, as the woman said yes he may take a seat, when Alexis Flaunts herself over to his table and begins to ask questions about him being there, and who his new friend is. Blake excuses his Mothers/ Fathers behavior and walks out into the street. Fully pissed.
Int.Coffee.shop.Day1
Blake walks into the Coffee shop.
Asks permission for seat & When granted takes a seat.
Starts talking to the woman.
The woman tells him a little about why she is there.
Blake grabs a packets of sugar, trying to avoid her story and spills it everywhere.
She then gets angry, but as he makes a joke he seems to stroke a cord.
She ends up asking him to go somewhere to test her theory of s&m and feral men.2
BLAKE
Pushed his way lightly through the through the crowded coffee shop.
He sees no vacancy but a table in the far corner, were a woman in her twenties sits, reading a magazine. He notices that she is dressed quiet professionally, unlike him who is casually dressed.
Walking towards the table he stops short.
He sees no vacancy but a table in the far corner, were a woman in her twenties sits, reading a magazine. He notices that she is dressed quiet professionally, unlike him who is casually dressed.
Walking towards the table he stops short.
WOMAN
looks up at Blake.
BLAKE3
Would you mind if I joined you? Everywhere is taken.4
WOMAN5
Nods, glancing back at her magazine and users Blake to sit down.6
BLAKE7
Cheers... This is not usually a crowded place8
Pulls up a seat, sits down and looks directly at the woman as she is trying to read her magazine.
His eyes wander, as he checks her out. Admiring her shapely body, and he tanned complexion.9
WOMAN10
Looks up from her Magazine, closing the cover, and stares annoyingly at Blake. A matter of fact expression plastered across her face.11
I wouldn't know I don't come her often enough. I don't even usually go into places like this at all. There was no where else in town I could go, well know where were my boyfriend wouldn't find me. Trust me he would not find me here, I would not find me here it is so dirty and hygienically a disgrace; But its not like I have much of a choice now he is back in town.12
BLAKE13
looks blankly at the woman.
Thinking she might have given a little to much information.14
(internal narration) Jesus woman I didn't ask for your life story.15
Oh I see16
Slightly offended by the comment, Blake takes a packet of sugar from the cup to his left and rips it open sending sugar flying everywhere.17
WOMAN18
Looks down to her Lap filled with sugar.
Angry expression cast upon her face.
Dusts sugar of with her hands.
Looks back up at an embarrassed Blake.19
Your lucky I have no place to go right now or I would slam your face so hard into this table, you would be bleeding for the next week and a half.20
BLAKE21
Thinking of ways to make this situation less awkward.
Expression changes to a smile.22
Ah I see a little S&M never hurt anyone.23
WOMAN24
Looks strangely at Blake.
Her hands moving closer to his.
A kind of sexual wild look in her eyes.
Brushes past his hand and smiles seductively.25
Don't tell me you like a woman like that?
growls softly.
BLAKE
Nervously leaves his hand under hers.
Starts shaking a little
Sweat pouring from his forehead
Gives her a friendly laugh.
Moves forward.26
Only if you want me to
Jokingly whispers27
WOMAN28
laughs, moving back.
Letting herself ease into the chair29
Why is it always the Feral looking men that are the hottest when it comes to pushing a woman's buttons?30
31
BLAKE32
fidgets in chair.
Body still slightly shakes
He eases back into his chair, like the woman.
Extending his hand33
Feral, and what makes me so different from you little miss spank me.34
WOMAN35
breaths heavy
Looks around seeing if anyone noticed
Bend forward, ushering him towards her with her finger.36
BLAKE:
moves forward again until their faces are almost in sink with one another's.
Breathing heavily now with slight arousal.
Keeps his eyes fixated on hers.37
WOMAN38
I don't know... what you say we go find out?39
BLAKE
Breathless, takes a deep breath in nervously smiles.40
I'd say why not, you never know until you give something a go.41
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WOMAN28
laughs, moving back.
Letting herself ease into the chair29
Why is it always the Feral looking men that are the hottest when it comes to pushing a woman's buttons?30
31
BLAKE32
fidgets in chair.
Body still slightly shakes
He eases back into his chair, like the woman.
Extending his hand33
Feral, and what makes me so different from you little miss spank me.34
WOMAN35
breaths heavy
Looks around seeing if anyone noticed
Bend forward, ushering him towards her with her finger.36
BLAKE:
moves forward again until their faces are almost in sink with one another's.
Breathing heavily now with slight arousal.
Keeps his eyes fixated on hers.37
WOMAN38
I don't know... what you say we go find out?39
BLAKE
Breathless, takes a deep breath in nervously smiles.40
I'd say why not, you never know until you give something a go.41
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Adding your comment:
I liked the body language, it really painted the picture perfectly! Fantastic job! ^^
-Lissy
along with his skillfull insoiration and this song by MSI.. I think it turned out well...
