Imogen2077 - Chapter 1 - Do You Love Me Now?

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I was sitting on a hopeless excuse for a chair. My arms bound tight around two wooden legs. I couldn't move so my body, arched awkwardly, was stationary. My legs were uncomfortably positioned which made me wince in natural pain. I bothered to open my eyes slightly. What was I looking at? The pain of uncomfortable placement made my eyelids become heavy. I felt like I was slipping in and out of consciousness. What had happened to me? 2

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My eyes sluggishly became clear however the rest of my body was feeling slouched, uncomfortable and submerged in unwelcome pain. I see a light flash upon the plain ceiling. I lazily move my head forward so I could see what was in front of me. Flickering in my path of vision was a luminous screen. I focused more on the text which was being displayed.4

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Immy2077: Peter I love you. 8

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ValentineBoy455: I love you too Immy babe. 10

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I was confused, however i read on in fright.14

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ValentineBoy455: Hello Imogen, I have been talking to you for over three months now. I don't understand why you would choose somebody like me. Imogen, I am 45 years old, I am dissapointed that you have ignored the instructions given to you by your parents. "Don't use chatrooms, if you do, don't give out your details, don't ask to meet anybody." Imogen, you will be forgotten very soon. Your mother would not care for you now that you have gone off with an older man. You will do everything I say. Try to escape, your time is up. I will be giving you instructions every time I come online. So be prepared for the tasks ahead of you Imogen. Do you love me now? 18

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ValentineBoy455 has signed out.22

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I felt the immense fear that was battling down into my head. I couldn't believe this was happening to me. What was I going to do? As I screamed out in terror, I could hear a door opening behind me. Banging footsteps coming closer, my throat closing up and my eyes drowning in tears. A hand slammed down on my shoulder, with immense force.24

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  • Keyootee
    April 5, 2008

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    usually I don't much care for stories that have people chatting on the internet on it, but this story interested me. I am curious to know who put there hand on her shoulder. Maybe it was her mother? What sort of instructions would the guy give her? what would make her do as he says? She could just stop talking to him.


  • tallblondie gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    Excellent chapter! I liked this somewhat more than your first piece - but mainly as it contained more descriptions. Your story seems to be evolving nicely - well done!

    Keep writing!