A Soft Breeze

Rays of sunlight poured into the stained glass window, lighting up the face of my gorgeous wife. Her blonde hair shone in the light, and for a moment I was blinded. Shaking my head in disbelief as I watched over my angel, I realized the sun was making her hair shine so beautifully, and that there weren’t specks of gold floating over her entire being. As I lay in the bed we shared in our small, yet cozy, house on the beach, I reached over and stroked her pink cheeks with my forefinger. She was awake enough to respond to my touch, her lips slowly awakening to their fullest, rubbing against each other as if she was smoothing out lipstick. With a slight roll, she was within my reach. My arms extended, pulling her close to me, feeling her warmth. A slight flutter of eyelashes came before I once again looked into the liveliest and most beautiful green eyes I have ever come to known. 1

It was only moments later that the wind blew a soft breeze into our bedroom. The window to my immediate left was covered in white drapes that were long enough to touch the floor. Her green eyes shifted behind me, gazing out the window.2

“Look, honey. The water is so clear today, perfect for a picnic.” A smile so sweet came next. One that makes me melt every time I picture it. 3

“Mm, yes, baby. A picnic will do just fine,” I replied as I wrapped my arms around her tighter, protecting her from the cool breeze. 4

Slowly, we began to sink away from each other, after what must have been hours of me holding her in my arms, sweet kisses planted on each others cheeks. I watched her climb out of the bed, reclining back and smiling at her splendor. These were the days I liked best. I would always remember this day…For it was my favorite day of all. 5

A lovely humming sound slowly drifted up the stairs, almost as if it was carried by the breeze of the beach. Opening my eyes from my rest and thoughts, I made my way out of bed. I was wearing her favorite boxers, I remember. There were often nights that she would dig through my drawers for minutes, only to produce these very same boxers in which she would slip into for the night. Living on this island controlled our days attire. The weather fluctuated between warm, hot, and really hot. Let’s just say on those nights of really hot, there wasn’t much body contact. Two bodies sweating from heat entangled together in a loving embrace was utterly disgusting to my lovely treasure of a wife. And how could I even think of making her uncomfortable for my own wants? She was my life, and I hers. 6

I continued my way down the winding staircase to come across the smell of bacon. Oh how I loved her bacon. The way she cooked it so it was crisp, yet soggy in the middle it was amazing. You’d get a bite of that good ole bacon crunch then your teeth would seep right into a gooey taste of softness. My nose tickled with excitement every time I smelled it, especially this day. 7

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The story's not finished...It's not even close. But this is my first REAL story in a loooong time. I'm not great, but I consider myself at least halfway decent. Tell me how you like it so far and I'll consider finishing it up! Thanks for comments. P.S. I added a bit more to the story.

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  • Frozentearz
    August 28, 2005
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    OOh I think it is worth it...
    it held my attention and it left me wanting to
    continue to read more..
    I hope you continue it
    Blessings
    Tears

  • GuhHaTeYost
    December 29, 2004
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    I like it so far. its a sweet relationship. I love your descriptions it gives such great imagery. Something I want to try and improve on for stories I may or may not write in the future lol.
    You're a very talented story write. I could smell the bacon!

    ~*~Guh~*~

  • ICaughtFire
    December 28, 2004
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    Yessir! . I'll notify you when I add more .

  • invested
    December 28, 2004
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    Yeah writing from the perspective of the opposite sex at times can be very challenging but a lot of times it is much more entertaining as well. I'm glas there will be more of this to come I'll have to read the rest when you finish

  • ICaughtFire
    December 28, 2004
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    Aw, thank you so much. Have I ever told you how much I appreciate your comments? I truthfully look forward to you reading my work and commenting. Silly, aren't I?
    I really did enjoy writing this, and I'm for sure not done with it, not nearly. I have a small outline I'm working on in my mind to further it, and I'm excited to complete it. The thing that shocked me the most about this...is how I'm writing from a male point of view. Heh. I'm so cool . Anyhow, thank you for your time and energy in reading and commenting .

  • invested
    December 28, 2004
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    Wonderful work, a vivid image of something so beautiful is something I always treasure. I could see the perfect beach house and the loving couple very well.
    I'm usually not much for love types of poetry or stories but when it is this well written and it actually makes me feel the happiness and such I embrace it more than any other form...good work here wonderful

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