Musical Gift

All is quiet
.....No sound is heard
Then comes a strange melody
..............It’s the sound of the night.1

Crickets chirp
......Wind blows
............Tree’s sway
And the music is heard.2

A car rushes past
.........It makes a noise
Like someone trying
...............To play the flute.3

A wolf in the distance
...Howls
A dog nearby sings
.............Its song back.4

The sound of the night
.......Is a strange melody indeed
But once you unwrap life
...............The gift you have is music.

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  • jblover012
    June 27, 2008
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    neat-o


  • TheOnAHiatuser
    May 27, 2008
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    Good

    I quite liked it!


  • NightTime-Fox
    May 21, 2008

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    I like it.. kinda reminds me of were i live in the middle of summer... i love night at that time of year...


  • ForestFaery
    May 6, 2008

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    interesting

    il iked it... i could tell it was ment as a poem but it had no beat to it... other than the beat what you said is true. Music is a gift.


    • Namoopf
      May 7, 2008
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      There are different kind of poems...and thanks =D


  • HopelesslyInLove
    April 17, 2008

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    Hmmm... this was interesting. Beautifully written and true, music is very much a gift. I enjoyed it much and thanks for entering my contest!

    *KAT*


  • Adelaide Blood
    April 12, 2008

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    Yes it is

    gorgeous! wonderful! superb! awesome! great! i could go on forever about how much i loved this poem!


  • MoonRoseWolf gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    This is a gorgeous poem!

    I especially love how you've done the .....thing on some of the lines,it definately adds a good creative edge to it. I also like how much movement and description you've put in this through your descriptions, and how beautifully simple the whole poem is.

    Overall, I really enjoyed this, well done!

    ~Mirry xxx

    BTW, I think it's a very good title

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