All is quiet
.....No sound is heard
Then comes a strange melody
..............It’s the sound of the night.1
Crickets chirp
......Wind blows
............Tree’s sway
And the music is heard.2
A car rushes past
.........It makes a noise
Like someone trying
...............To play the flute.3
A wolf in the distance
...Howls
A dog nearby sings
.............Its song back.4
The sound of the night
.......Is a strange melody indeed
But once you unwrap life
...............The gift you have is music.
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A contest entry
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Is the title right for it?
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neat-o
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Good
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I like it.. kinda reminds me of were i live in the middle of summer... i love night at that time of year...
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interesting
il iked it... i could tell it was ment as a poem but it had no beat to it... other than the beat what you said is true. Music is a gift. -
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There are different kind of poems...and thanks =D
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Hmmm... this was interesting. Beautifully written and true, music is very much a gift. I enjoyed it much and thanks for entering my contest!
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Yes it is
gorgeous! wonderful! superb! awesome! great! i could go on forever about how much i loved this poem! -
This is a gorgeous poem!
I especially love how you've done the .....thing on some of the lines,it definately adds a good creative edge to it. I also like how much movement and description you've put in this through your descriptions, and how beautifully simple the whole poem is.
Overall, I really enjoyed this, well done!
~Mirry xxx
BTW, I think it's a very good title
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