I haven't seen you even once
Yet my heart is yours to hold
To care and watch and comfort you
And banish wrongs of old1
I wish to hold you in my arms
And feel your fluid grace
But I can only envision you
And your sweet embrace2
I can only imagine your smile
And what it would do to me
The beauty of your happy face
Would surely set me free3
I see other lovers, standing arm in arm
Enjoying one anothers company
I envy them for while they are one
The two of us will never be4
My dreams are haunted by fantasy
By how the world would be
If you and I could meet some day
I only want to see5
But alas it will not come to pass
And seperate we must stay
But in time perhaps we can be one
And I look forward to that day.
Author notes
I couldn't sleep at all. Seriously, I lay in bed for almost six hours, wide awake, before I finally said, "screw this," did some yoga and wrote this poem. This is for my new SW GF Avangeline Evania. I hope you like it and perhaps the ending can come true... someday.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best Poetry! by HopelesslyInLove.
200 points, ended April 18, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry!!!! by Forgotten Anomaly.
900 points, ended June 5, 2008, 62 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very sweet poem. It has to be one of the better love poems I have read today (there have been a lot of them). You could use some more grammar in this but overal it was well formed. It was a very smooth peice and didn't seem choppy or anything. Overall wonderfully done. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Awww. ... this was so sweet... I love romance and you did a good job of covering it. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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i like it good ending
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I LOVE IT
Awesome job, really well done! -
AWESOME !!!
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So beautifle.
i love it. so cute. so sad. guess what nobody has ever had a crush on me ever.
kitkat -
I hope we do meet someday. who knows, maybe we will. I would love that. i really loved this. i look foreward to what the future will bring. ♥
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I really like this, it's so heartfelt, and so personal....
I know how it feels too, as a few years ago, my partner and I had to have a long-distance relationship for about a year or so.....
This was a really well-written poem, and I'm glad it might have helped solve some of the insomnia!
Well done, I hope she likes it
~Mirry xxx
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