Life

The darkness swirled,
a pitch-black storm,
In my heart.1

I had no one,
Not a soul who cared,
I did not see the light.2

But now I see,
Something light,
Something bright.3

I wonder what it is,
But then I see,
This is how life is supposed to be.

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  • Classic Violette
    May 5, 2009

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    ooooo

    Very deep and soo sooo true. This had a great sense of flow to it. You should seriously consider writing a book of poetry, I'd buy it


  • Vampiric souls
    March 31, 2008

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    Diffirent, this is obscure and just a little odd, if you son't mind me saying. I like the way you mix your words, GOOD JOB


  • Prodigious.Mirth gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Not a soul who cared

    WOW this was simply lovely <3
    the lst soul found within love and a new lease of life..

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