The fresh aroma that lingers in the air
blood trickling down the blood tainted fangs
The smell of mud on the soft furry paw
Prints with each step onto the loamy lands1
An endless journey towards the wild lands above
many dangers many risks
but as long as we're united
walking as a pack
nothing shall stop us2
A thousand dreams to reach the sky
but one knows that I could never fly
fears and worries shouted out loud
as high as I could get on top of a stoney ridge
lamenting every night to the motherly mirror
that hung ever so steadily in the sky3
Radiating its radiant rays
reflecting her beauty in the mystic ponds
I could never ever take my gaze off that beauty in the sky
nor ever forget the light that guides me through the night
Author notes
Well this is a poem I specially wrote for Haxxor my Bro! He asked me to write awolf poem and join his contest so I did^_^! here you go bro and I hope that everyone who love wolves will like it too.
A contest entry
- Wolf poems! by HaXXoR.
350 points, ended June 2, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me honest opinion and thoughts about this!
Comments
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WoW.. omg... you have done it again
this is a wolf poem i really enjoyed.. great job. all the details.. your choice of words.. the pride.. so good. and a really good flow. i totally love this poem.
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Thanks for writing this! I really like it!
Good job!
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WoW.. it was alot of pride in this one i liked it alot.. it was quite short.. but omg.. it said alot.. and i get the picture of it in my head when i read it really beautiful many dreams. many thoughts : and deep
Really good work!
keep up the good work
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