Dakota Morning Chapter One

Dakota was hatched from an egg encased in a membrane made of blood and molasses. Dakota picked off the excess shell that still covered parts of her skin then walked outside. The clouds began to darken and it started to rain. Water soaked her hair and dripped down her red and brown stained body.

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