Orochimaru's Plan Part Six, The Curse of The Snake

The bitter breeze, rolled in, it felt deathly cold; the full moon gave a ray of redness to Orochiamru's eyes. He narrowed them towards Celeste, making her sweat stop at her brow, her body became a frighten child from his image. His pale death like hand moved from his side in a flash and he gave three, two, and then one with his fingers. The four rushed in on either side of her and from the front came Kimmimaru. He walked without a care, he knew what to do she was now just like them, part of Orochimaru just like himself.1

Celeste knew all of a sudden what Orochimaru was planning, she looked at them all, and each one of them had a mark.2

"So sensei, are you going to give me a mark just like them?" I said my tone emotionless. He grinned, and his eyes flashed in that moment I was being held down by Kimmimaru’s foot.3

"It's really simple; the cruse mark that you will have will be a combination of Kimmimaru and Sasuke's. Truly, a great power I'll be giving you however, there will be a one out of two percent chance you will live, well says the last one who died. Now Kimmimaru you know what to do." Kimmimaru said nothing but pulled her up and held her there on the ground.4

I grunted from his strength “Darn it! He got me in by my hair, crap not to mention his foot is on my back!”I said to myself Orochimaru’s charka was around him like a huge snake was gilding around him. He used a few hand sighs to make the justu but before I felt pain going in my veins then into my heart, all I remember from blacking out was his fangs. He grinned and then all was left was this burning in my neck and in my chest at the same time. 5

I feel to the ground yelling from the pain, and I was down for good.
Orochimaru came in my room; apparently I was knocked out for a very long time. He seated himself next to me and turned to me.6

“So tell me what are you feeling?” My eyes turned to his, I was at a loss, and he was like a map that you can’t really follow like right now. Since when was he like this? Caring?7

“Well, I feel dizzy, confused, and also a little concerned.” Orochimaru nodded, and pulled out a veil.8

“Use this to ease the pain in your chest and what are you so concerned about? You lived through the cruse’s mark through your body. To tell you the truth, you’re the first one to be given the “Heaven Stone Cruse.” He eyed towards the door, I sighed and told him what I truly was worried about.9

“Look sensei this is the turth on my own behalf, I’m scared of what you …What you,made me.” He was silent as the grave, his face seemed to be the grave. I went on fearing he might leave he had to hear this no doubt about it. “I know something has changed in me, I can feel it I’m not myself though I have waken up…What did you turn me into sensei.” He got up in a slow motion and gave a sad sigh.10

“What I have given you as been probaly a mistake that will never happen again, in do time you will know of what that cruse will do. To be honest when I had created it I thought that this mark will be the one, the one people will fear…But about what it will do I do not know, the purpose was to increase on speed and power by atleast ninty-percent…So who knows.” I never saw him like this, so sorrowful and gloomy.11

“Oh.” What else should I have said? I was some what speachless from his motivation by this talk. He seemed not to talk about it…Then again he knew something about it! He was just being that pale snake he was..But was the whole act of kindness..He was concerned? I saw it right into his eyes. Orochimaru walked out the door and locked it..This was very odd you could hear the sorrow from his own foot steps.12

“What the heck was that all about? Also he knows something about this mark…Just what is his problem about not telling me?”13

To be Cont..

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PART 6 hmm what will this be about?

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